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Array ( [sid] => 135603 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => blackness around my world [time] => 2007-06-27 13:02:34 [hometext] => this is about my friend and her bf who is having trouble. that is what the other poems were about too. sorry if it wasn't clear. I am fine all i can't reply to anyone because I can't get to my pms. [bodytext] => Someday I will be perfect
I will rise above the blackness that covers my world

I will mean everything to him
everyone and anyone will mean nothing

Emptiness is within
and all around
there is nothing else left of me to give

bleeding to feel so needed
I am the angel
your the real demon..

...trying to get in
to get through me...

you can't reach
I turn away
cursing your name
I will not let you give me the blame

Vampyress Jenni [comments] => 3 [counter] => 343 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Phantomvampyress [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

blackness around my world

Contributed by Phantomvampyress on Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 01:02:34 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Someday I will be perfect
I will rise above the blackness that covers my world

I will mean everything to him
everyone and anyone will mean nothing

Emptiness is within
and all around
there is nothing else left of me to give

bleeding to feel so needed
I am the angel
your the real demon..

...trying to get in
to get through me...

you can't reach
I turn away
cursing your name
I will not let you give me the blame

Vampyress Jenni

Copyright © Phantomvampyress ... [ 2007-06-27 13:02:34]
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Re: blackness around my world (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 11:25:25 PM AEST
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Man, don't we tie ourselves in knots - over our inner turmoil as much as other people! A lot of complex and familiar struggles in this one, Jenni.

S.

Re: blackness around my world (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 02:31:42 AM AEST
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we always throw ourselves through hoops hoping that one day we'll mean enough. great poem, i love the flow and message in this piece!

Re: blackness around my world (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 10:10:09 AM AEST
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A very good poem. Painful but with a stand. Still love the way your writing flows.

--kevin
The lonely vagabond

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