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Array ( [sid] => 13548 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Because I Love You! [time] => 2003-03-01 03:00:00 [hometext] => Look into yourself ..... I posted this on "Its Written and recieved a wonderful comment, this must be shared ......
****************************************** [bodytext] => Are we the one's who are damned,
if we show others an unbreakable unconditioned love,
we who want deeply to shed peace across this world,
which lies dressed in hate and lies,
mocked and shunned, because some don't understand
how one can love so fully and accept all,
leaving a swarm of graceful love,
"Do they know their true identity",
or are they those who build walls,
to keep only who they want around,
then a great force comes over,
and they shy away into lingured dust,
mocking us again, laughing,
thinking in their thoughts of wicked wounds,
hoping the one that once touched them, would soon perish, leave,
and never return, so they can keep there abode intact,
"I have been damned many a time,
I feel it ..... I hear it .... and taste it,
Does it hold me back,
I think not,
only gives me more power to love others even deeper,
the crowd in which I keep company,
knows my love,
its an unending river,
for if I only loved them,
I would die, alone,
though death is a gift,
of eternal love,
I can't accept that yet,
so that means while I am here,
I must give "All" my bounty,
my unending river, of great love,
for I have found this world to need much,
would you help,
my vine is growing weak without you,
love needs to be this world's music,
I can't do it alone,
Because I LOVE YOU!"
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 247 [topic] => 19 [informant] => Valerie_Pearson [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
Because I Love You!

Contributed by Valerie_Pearson on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



Are we the one's who are damned,
if we show others an unbreakable unconditioned love,
we who want deeply to shed peace across this world,
which lies dressed in hate and lies,
mocked and shunned, because some don't understand
how one can love so fully and accept all,
leaving a swarm of graceful love,
"Do they know their true identity",
or are they those who build walls,
to keep only who they want around,
then a great force comes over,
and they shy away into lingured dust,
mocking us again, laughing,
thinking in their thoughts of wicked wounds,
hoping the one that once touched them, would soon perish, leave,
and never return, so they can keep there abode intact,
"I have been damned many a time,
I feel it ..... I hear it .... and taste it,
Does it hold me back,
I think not,
only gives me more power to love others even deeper,
the crowd in which I keep company,
knows my love,
its an unending river,
for if I only loved them,
I would die, alone,
though death is a gift,
of eternal love,
I can't accept that yet,
so that means while I am here,
I must give "All" my bounty,
my unending river, of great love,
for I have found this world to need much,
would you help,
my vine is growing weak without you,
love needs to be this world's music,
I can't do it alone,
Because I LOVE YOU!"




Copyright © Valerie_Pearson ... [ 2003-03-01 03:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Because I Love You! (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 03:57:19 AM AEST
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very strong message indeed, good write

Shari


Re: Because I Love You! (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 03:57:54 AM AEST
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I think I fell into that river of yours Valerie, and I thank God I did ... one of the best things to happen to me ... So I will respond with "yes, I'll help spread this message .. I LOVE YOU TOO!" :)))) Jan


Re: Because I Love You! (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 05:12:32 AM AEST
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i can only try my best, but i reckon if i keep trying i will get good at it eventually


Re: Because I Love You! (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 09:46:59 AM AEST
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Val,so well written I wouldnt expect less from you! Your messasge came out so clear!
I really loved reading this especially the part where it saids I've been Dambed so many times ! No It didnt hold you back thats what makes me enjoy you so much more Your strength! Christina


Re: Because I Love You! (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 01:44:54 PM AEST
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GREAT


Re: Because I Love You! (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 03:36:31 PM AEST
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ahhhh you know i love ya and i love this too valerie, it's one of your sweetest writes and so dear, huggs always nessa


Re: Because I Love You! (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 02:21:24 AM AEST
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I must give all my bounty, my unending river of great love...love needs to be this world's music. wonderful lines and a beautiful message. venkat


Re: Because I Love You! (User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 08:40:09 PM AEST
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Valerie, you have sent a valuable message to the world to love one another. We have faith that love can overcome the evils. I'll be with you. Love, Gloria




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