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Array ( [sid] => 135440 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Too Perfect for Words [time] => 2007-06-22 03:48:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm making up the difference
so we can be perfect again
I'll fix this
just let me try this one more time

everyday you amaze me
with every promise you keep
I find myself needing this
I'm starving for your attention
and I want anything but to resist

please keep this going
no one's stopping us now
with things so clear this time
even I can't let you down

linger
linger
just a little longer please
the hours you're away
begin to feel like weeks
but you're here right now
and it's only you and me
we can tell of our dreams
the ones we can't make come true
it took me far too long to realize
that all I need is you


it's something more than I could say
you forgive the unforgiveable
and believe the worst of lies
I've only brought you down
turn me into something worth keeping around

linger
linger
don't leave me like this
it's more than just a feeling
it's more than just a kiss

what you're trying to do..
I could never let you..
a mistake I've made a thousand times
do anything
just dont leave me behind

memories
and fantasies
you were all that got me by
I cant seem to think of what'd I'd do
if you left me
if you were gone

so everything's all wrong
perfect's just not right
I can't go like this
I can't go like this...

linger
linger
just a little longer please
keep me by your side
and keep me at ease..
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Too Perfect for Words

Contributed by StephaniePaige on Friday, 22nd June 2007 @ 03:48:57 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I'm making up the difference
so we can be perfect again
I'll fix this
just let me try this one more time

everyday you amaze me
with every promise you keep
I find myself needing this
I'm starving for your attention
and I want anything but to resist

please keep this going
no one's stopping us now
with things so clear this time
even I can't let you down

linger
linger
just a little longer please
the hours you're away
begin to feel like weeks
but you're here right now
and it's only you and me
we can tell of our dreams
the ones we can't make come true
it took me far too long to realize
that all I need is you


it's something more than I could say
you forgive the unforgiveable
and believe the worst of lies
I've only brought you down
turn me into something worth keeping around

linger
linger
don't leave me like this
it's more than just a feeling
it's more than just a kiss

what you're trying to do..
I could never let you..
a mistake I've made a thousand times
do anything
just dont leave me behind

memories
and fantasies
you were all that got me by
I cant seem to think of what'd I'd do
if you left me
if you were gone

so everything's all wrong
perfect's just not right
I can't go like this
I can't go like this...

linger
linger
just a little longer please
keep me by your side
and keep me at ease..




Copyright © StephaniePaige ... [ 2007-06-22 03:48:57]
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Re: Too Perfect for Words (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 22nd June 2007 @ 10:33:57 AM AEST
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I liked how you repeated the stanzas, you really put your heart into this write
Michelle


Re: Too Perfect for Words (User Rating: 1 )
by madhusudan on Friday, 22nd June 2007 @ 11:13:21 PM AEST
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tthe linger linger part was kinda nice....sweet poem...
linger
linger
yep really sweet!!! and very touchin!


Re: Too Perfect for Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 12:45:30 AM AEST
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Oh wow. This was such a beautiful heartfelt write. So much
romance and soft allure dwells in and between the lines.
Stephanie, you write with so much heart, it is difficult not to
love everything you capture and will onto the page. I hate
to take anything out of context, as if to disturb the perfectness
of the write as is, but I have to say, this bit ..

"we can tell of our dreams
the ones we can't make come true
it took me far too long to realize
that all I need is you"


just ... wow! That was brilliant. I mean, it's such a simple
thought, but so few of us actually realize it, let alone admit it.

extraordinarily beautiful ~

You've got enormous passion! And it definitely shows.

~Breezy
(loving this one)




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