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Array ( [sid] => 135355 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I can't keep doing this to you [time] => 2007-06-19 05:45:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => We've come so far from the first day we met
And time has gone so fast
soon you will forget
I can't keep doing this to you
But I'm hurting me as well
Don't want you to be a secret
that I could never tell
But sometimes I feel you've already slipped away
I want to comfort you
but can't find the words to say
You hold me close and I feel your love
Other times you push me away like you've had enough
You need to know I care
I don't want to let you go
But you can't keep doing this to me
Your feelings you don't show
Why do you keep me around, what is it you're trying to find?
Don't want to be around you if I'm wasting all your time
So please let me know how you feel
Cause I can't pretend anymore
I want us to be real
We don't have to be apart
But we need to know
Cause we're breaking each other's heart [comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Marly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I can't keep doing this to you

Contributed by Marly on Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 05:45:11 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

We've come so far from the first day we met
And time has gone so fast
soon you will forget
I can't keep doing this to you
But I'm hurting me as well
Don't want you to be a secret
that I could never tell
But sometimes I feel you've already slipped away
I want to comfort you
but can't find the words to say
You hold me close and I feel your love
Other times you push me away like you've had enough
You need to know I care
I don't want to let you go
But you can't keep doing this to me
Your feelings you don't show
Why do you keep me around, what is it you're trying to find?
Don't want to be around you if I'm wasting all your time
So please let me know how you feel
Cause I can't pretend anymore
I want us to be real
We don't have to be apart
But we need to know
Cause we're breaking each other's heart

Copyright © Marly ... [ 2007-06-19 05:45:11]
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Re: I can't keep doing this to you (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 06:47:35 AM AEST
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Emotions at high levels in this write.....

Dont want to keep you a secret..... that is strong....... we all hold a secret at times but when it is within a relationship makes it so much more difficult.

Good strong write

Michelle

Re: I can't keep doing this to you (User Rating: 1 )
by StephaniePaige on Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 10:53:00 AM AEST
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ah, a situation that I've been on both sides of...it's a hard thing to go through. i hope it's not something you're dealing with now. Good way of showing emotion.

Re: I can't keep doing this to you (User Rating: 1 )
by Grownbabygirl on Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 06:29:26 AM AEST
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Wow, I'm going through the same thing right now. Good luck to you and thank you for sharing. "Great write"

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