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[aid] => mick
[title] => Collision (This Is Where It Ends)
[time] => 2007-06-08 14:27:56
[hometext] => I don't know where I got this. Its sort of creepy actually.
[bodytext] => going about too engrossed in my own thoughts I hear something- urgency- and I look up but not quickly enough. You and I careen into each other I see stars my head aches black- everywhere pain so terrible so overwhelming can't stand it laying on the cold hard ground blood and sweat trickle into my eye and all of a sudden pain and hurt builds up like nausea anchoring itself in the back of my throat my stomach lurches, and I open my mouth This terrible scream pleading- it's not me anymore I'm above, watching the scene I see the mauled body on the ground face twisted in pain crying out to anyone that will listen With convulsions vomits up blood weakly onto the concrete, writhing in agony. Now the form is laying twisted limbs bent in unnatural positions suffering, wrenched with pain trying so hard just to breathe trembling violently upon exhalation. I see the helpless look in the eyes of the near-dead girl how she feels, so horrible alone and lost. Like nobody cares the hurt of it all blood flowing from so many wounds mixing with dirty rainwater bruises clothes ripped, hanging off the emaciated body mouth open in expectation- of what? The wild, inhuman look staring into darkness Then the eyes glaze over, and weak shaking turns to seizures. her spine bends completely backwards limbs splayed out at awkward angles taking one final shuddering breath. then her body crumples in defeat laying in a puddle of blood in the alley encompassed in shadows, except for one flickering streetlamp and from this view looking like any other forgotten, broken toy getting soaked by the rain. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 13 [informant] => musicXisXlife [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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