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And they loved each other just like anyone else.
And the captain would call her every single day;
Be it london, new york, India or norway.

And when he reached base, they still spoke to each other;
In his industry there were a lot of girls but he loved her like no other.
Somehow she started missing him as he was always away...
And one day called it off much to his dismay...

And he looked back at the times he went over to meet her;
It was for a day or two but even then he couldnt be with her.
He took her along to people and places instead of just being together;
And though he didnt realise it, she felt their love go weaker...

And when it hit him hard, he wanted to cut himself to pieces;
And he wanted the plane he was carrying to crash and burn him to ashes.
But he was scared to do so and cried himself to tears;
And if she didnt come back he would be lonely for years...

He knows he made a mistake but everyone gets a second chance;
Anything that can make her look back and give me another glance.
she is 21 now and he 25, he loves her like crazy and thats his question to you...
What does he do? should he wait or regret this forever and bid her adieu... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 48 [informant] => madhusudan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

A question to all of you

Contributed by madhusudan on Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 04:06:36 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

There was this boy and there was this girl;
And they loved each other just like anyone else.
And the captain would call her every single day;
Be it london, new york, India or norway.

And when he reached base, they still spoke to each other;
In his industry there were a lot of girls but he loved her like no other.
Somehow she started missing him as he was always away...
And one day called it off much to his dismay...

And he looked back at the times he went over to meet her;
It was for a day or two but even then he couldnt be with her.
He took her along to people and places instead of just being together;
And though he didnt realise it, she felt their love go weaker...

And when it hit him hard, he wanted to cut himself to pieces;
And he wanted the plane he was carrying to crash and burn him to ashes.
But he was scared to do so and cried himself to tears;
And if she didnt come back he would be lonely for years...

He knows he made a mistake but everyone gets a second chance;
Anything that can make her look back and give me another glance.
she is 21 now and he 25, he loves her like crazy and thats his question to you...
What does he do? should he wait or regret this forever and bid her adieu...

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Re: A question to all of you (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 08:01:12 PM AEST
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You must wait my friend where there is True Love there is always HOPE.

well written.
FRANCO.

Re: A question to all of you (User Rating: 1 )
by DrowningHeart on Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 10:56:12 PM AEST
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A true romance indeed. Now to all those who have loved and lost, know that the pain does stop hurting. It appears to me that your love for her might be just a little bit stronger. Ask yourself does she want to be with you, if the answer is yes, I say wait. If the answer is No, bid her adieu...

Re: A question to all of you (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Saturday, 2nd June 2007 @ 12:06:32 AM AEST
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This is crazy. I feel like this is about me and my boyfriend who I've contemplated leaving because he is always away. Its hard to trust someone who's never there and is constantly surrounded by temptations (in your case girls, i guess). I think you should try to get her back. If she really is the one, then don't just let her get away.

Re: A question to all of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Nauzzica on Saturday, 2nd June 2007 @ 05:27:05 PM AEST
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I'm not great at advice to be honest... However, he shouldn't regret and let her go because that doesn't lead anywhere positive. And waiting doesn't amount to anything most of the time so.. I'd say go after her. He needs to prove his dedication of love to her.

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