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Array ( [sid] => 134508 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Something of Blue! [time] => 2007-05-19 12:10:10 [hometext] => this one is for my hearts mending..... i hope! [bodytext] =>
Must seem appropriate in your state of mind,

can't seem to realise how you hate it so,

afraid of causing me pain seems to blind,

blind you from the reakoning of me entoe.

Can't seem to figure you quiet out,

baffel me completely with you riddlish ways,

the more I share of myself the more you run and doubt,

beakon me then turn away confuzes leaves me to this haze.

So I try to hold it all inside,

yet you cry out saying stop hiding yourself away,

no matter what I do you don't see how I tried,

just my courage seems to lack and shrivel up in every way.

How I wish you could see into my mind,

read my everything from page to page,

understand how hard it is not to hope inside,

I try yet fail misrably for I lack the confidence to say.

So now I sit here dumbfounded and lonesome,

acting like I'm not hurting, like everythings just fine,

I pushed too much now theres nothing to look for,

if you wanted anything like that you'd give me a sign.

I would move heaven and earth for you all at once,

if it would get you back here with me, not apart,

but nothing seems good enough, not me at least,

pain i've inflicted has come and bit me in the heart.

Being with you touched my heart more than i can say,

you were just too busy to notice in that hell there could be a dove,

ashamed at the thought that maybe your heart might actually be mended,

hearts can bend, break, shatter, mine just crys out for you my love!

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 24 [informant] => jackson21 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Something of Blue!

Contributed by jackson21 on Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 12:10:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered




Must seem appropriate in your state of mind,

can't seem to realise how you hate it so,

afraid of causing me pain seems to blind,

blind you from the reakoning of me entoe.

Can't seem to figure you quiet out,

baffel me completely with you riddlish ways,

the more I share of myself the more you run and doubt,

beakon me then turn away confuzes leaves me to this haze.

So I try to hold it all inside,

yet you cry out saying stop hiding yourself away,

no matter what I do you don't see how I tried,

just my courage seems to lack and shrivel up in every way.

How I wish you could see into my mind,

read my everything from page to page,

understand how hard it is not to hope inside,

I try yet fail misrably for I lack the confidence to say.

So now I sit here dumbfounded and lonesome,

acting like I'm not hurting, like everythings just fine,

I pushed too much now theres nothing to look for,

if you wanted anything like that you'd give me a sign.

I would move heaven and earth for you all at once,

if it would get you back here with me, not apart,

but nothing seems good enough, not me at least,

pain i've inflicted has come and bit me in the heart.

Being with you touched my heart more than i can say,

you were just too busy to notice in that hell there could be a dove,

ashamed at the thought that maybe your heart might actually be mended,

hearts can bend, break, shatter, mine just crys out for you my love!





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Re: Something of Blue! (User Rating: 1 )
by AirHead on Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 08:57:53 PM AEST
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Its hurts so much when your heart is true & crying out fro your love




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