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Array ( [sid] => 134153 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When You Came Into My Life [time] => 2007-05-06 13:45:22 [hometext] => I had given up all hope in my life with relationships. I was in a very bad abusive relationship about a year ago. It's just been me and my daughter up till now. I been afraid to love and feel love. I was ok with that until I met him. [bodytext] => When You Came Into My Life

I don’t want to hurt him he’s so good to me
My plans for the future didn’t include three

He looks at me and I’m lost in his eyes
He kisses my lips, hand gently on my thighs

He brushes my face and embraces me
Immersed in his arms, feels like right place to be

Distracted by the sight of him
He swept me off my feet, caught me at a whim

Do I dare encounter thee
What does the future hold for me

Should I take a chance and follow my heart
But will my life fall apart

I’m shaken, confused, don’t know what to do
This feeling, this overwhelming sensation I feel, is it true

I’ve avoided love... pained deeply in the past
What if this feeling, doesn’t last

When I talk to him, I can not cease
When I talk to him, I feel at peace

It feels so right, why am I so afraid
For someone like this every night I’ve prayed

Don’t breath a word just hold me tight
Don’t ever let me out of your sight

When I am with you I feel so calm
So place your hand gently in to my palm

If god has sent someone as special as this
It must be an opportunity, I just can’t miss








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When You Came Into My Life

Contributed by Naomi on Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 01:45:22 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



When You Came Into My Life

I don’t want to hurt him he’s so good to me
My plans for the future didn’t include three

He looks at me and I’m lost in his eyes
He kisses my lips, hand gently on my thighs

He brushes my face and embraces me
Immersed in his arms, feels like right place to be

Distracted by the sight of him
He swept me off my feet, caught me at a whim

Do I dare encounter thee
What does the future hold for me

Should I take a chance and follow my heart
But will my life fall apart

I’m shaken, confused, don’t know what to do
This feeling, this overwhelming sensation I feel, is it true

I’ve avoided love... pained deeply in the past
What if this feeling, doesn’t last

When I talk to him, I can not cease
When I talk to him, I feel at peace

It feels so right, why am I so afraid
For someone like this every night I’ve prayed

Don’t breath a word just hold me tight
Don’t ever let me out of your sight

When I am with you I feel so calm
So place your hand gently in to my palm

If god has sent someone as special as this
It must be an opportunity, I just can’t miss












Copyright © Naomi ... [ 2007-05-06 13:45:22]
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Re: When You Came Into My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 04:08:39 PM AEST
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This is quite beautiful. sincere and yet a bit tence, a look in to that illusive window called the future, Your aprehension with love is understandable. Yor style of writting is very lovely. i see you have only write on the page in that case welcome and in the mean time keep writting, perhaps love is listening and may be just a dream away. Take care.


Ben


Re: When You Came Into My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 02:04:49 AM AEST
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Beautiful piece of writing. If one never takes a chance then one never knows. I too have been through some extremely rough stuff in my past. Sometimes each day can be a struggle, but you must give things a chance, if you don't....how will you ever know? Good luck.
Peace, Laura




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