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You are immoveable with your opinion
My what a sacred dog you are
Your righteousness does so correct me
How can I be so unjust?
So shall I change?
Rearrange this strange
Dilemma?
What sacred ground you must travel
To know all the answers
You the wise one
The injustice of all
Judged by your correctness?
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Judgement

Contributed by needledancing on Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 01:09:45 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

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You are immoveable with your opinion
My what a sacred dog you are
Your righteousness does so correct me
How can I be so unjust?
So shall I change?
Rearrange this strange
Dilemma?
What sacred ground you must travel
To know all the answers
You the wise one
The injustice of all
Judged by your correctness?

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Re: Judgement (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 01:31:46 PM AEST
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Definently thought provoking, my friend.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Judgement (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 03:45:18 PM AEST
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Judgement, let's see what the old biblical phrase, " Let Them Amongst You Who Are Free Of Sin Cast The First Stone " your poetry is not only beautfuil, but each word, each phrase is a picture that one may use as a guide while touring your inner soul, so lovely
these poems you write, up lifting but also wise in there message you wish to convey.
" The injustice of all Judged by your correctness?" A most compelling line. keep up the good work.

Ben

Re: Judgement (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 7th April 2007 @ 02:02:49 AM AEST
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My dear ND .. wow.

This is such a familiar song and you have expressed
the emotions of wanting to enlighten someone who
is too steadfast in their own to see things from
a different angle. Openess of mind is a treasured and
wonderful thing. What a lovely world it would be indeed if
it was more bounteous in its occupation of the human mind.

I love the way you wrote this. The form and word choices
really allow the meaning of the words to be expressed
with clarity.

~Breezy

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