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Array ( [sid] => 132572 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fade away (The nobody edition) [time] => 2007-03-10 20:08:25 [hometext] => Here is a different version of fade away, and i personally like this one better let me know if you like it or not, thanks [bodytext] => You have a life, Family and friends
It’s been this way for a long time,
You feel the sun, you know it’s warmth
It seems the days will go on.

The clouds and trees, you never notice them
The mountains they don’t move for you
The winds seem to speak to you
They whisper…

A lost soul in this old world
Traveling without really noticing
The ground under him calls out to him
They want to take the nobody away

The days become more confusing
It’s a battle you’ve been losing
And the souls that come to you
They whisper…

Fade, (Fade away)
Fade, (Fade away)
Fade, (Far away)
Fade.
Fade, You don’t exist
(Fade away)
Fade, Never meant to live
(Fade away)
Fade away, from this world
(Far away)
Fade

The days become more confusing
(Can’t you see that you are falling)
It’s a battle you’ve been losing
(Just like a star gone out of control)
You no longer carry the light within
(Give up you have no strength here)
And the souls that come to you
They whisper…

Fade, (Fade away)
Fade, (Fade away)
Fade, (Far away)
Fade.
Fade, You don’t exist
(Fade away)
Fade, Never meant to live
(Fade away)
Fade away, from this world
(Far away)
Fade

As I look into the darkness
As the nobody stares back at me
It’s just myself denying the truth inside

Am I meant to not live?
Am I not even breathing within?
Am I just a nobody at all?
Am I the old falling star?

Fade, (Fade away)
Fade, (Fade away)
Fade, (Far away)
Fade.
Fade, You don’t exist
(Fade away)
Fade, Never meant to live
(Fade away)
Fade away, from this world
Fade
They whisper fade away [comments] => 1 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 34 [informant] => silver_crested_shadow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Fade away (The nobody edition)

Contributed by silver_crested_shadow on Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 08:08:25 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



You have a life, Family and friends
It’s been this way for a long time,
You feel the sun, you know it’s warmth
It seems the days will go on.

The clouds and trees, you never notice them
The mountains they don’t move for you
The winds seem to speak to you
They whisper…

A lost soul in this old world
Traveling without really noticing
The ground under him calls out to him
They want to take the nobody away

The days become more confusing
It’s a battle you’ve been losing
And the souls that come to you
They whisper…

Fade, (Fade away)
Fade, (Fade away)
Fade, (Far away)
Fade.
Fade, You don’t exist
(Fade away)
Fade, Never meant to live
(Fade away)
Fade away, from this world
(Far away)
Fade

The days become more confusing
(Can’t you see that you are falling)
It’s a battle you’ve been losing
(Just like a star gone out of control)
You no longer carry the light within
(Give up you have no strength here)
And the souls that come to you
They whisper…

Fade, (Fade away)
Fade, (Fade away)
Fade, (Far away)
Fade.
Fade, You don’t exist
(Fade away)
Fade, Never meant to live
(Fade away)
Fade away, from this world
(Far away)
Fade

As I look into the darkness
As the nobody stares back at me
It’s just myself denying the truth inside

Am I meant to not live?
Am I not even breathing within?
Am I just a nobody at all?
Am I the old falling star?

Fade, (Fade away)
Fade, (Fade away)
Fade, (Far away)
Fade.
Fade, You don’t exist
(Fade away)
Fade, Never meant to live
(Fade away)
Fade away, from this world
Fade
They whisper fade away




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Re: Fade away (The nobody edition) (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 02:34:45 PM AEST
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Ah I like this and it fits as the previous was potentially lyrical yet clung to the metric of poem. Here it is a ballad and the sadness is now replaced with a profound feeling of truth. In my immodest opinion.

Peace
Yang




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