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Array ( [sid] => 132474 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fallen [time] => 2007-03-07 12:13:40 [hometext] => Revenge costs everything in the end. [bodytext] => An angel with blonde hair
Flying up to heaven.
A man going hunting
With a son who's only seven.
The boy sees the girl,
And yells at his father.
He turns and hits the boy,
Should've looked but didn't bother.
So dies the boy,
By hitting a rock.
But his passage to the sky
Is partially blocked.
The angel watches,
And decides on revenge.
She calls to power,
Ånd gives up her soul,
Just so to his death,
The father will roll.
As He looks down,
The daddy frowns,
And falls into the water.
The angel cries,
As her innocence dies,
And the little boy flies up.
He looks down and back at the sky,
Wondering why,
The beautiful angel no longer flies.
She has her wings, once white,
Now black, and darkest hair of all.
She's been cursed and alone,
And bound for Hell,
Ever since she took the fall. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 265 [topic] => 13 [informant] => flamingblade [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Fallen

Contributed by flamingblade on Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 12:13:40 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



An angel with blonde hair
Flying up to heaven.
A man going hunting
With a son who's only seven.
The boy sees the girl,
And yells at his father.
He turns and hits the boy,
Should've looked but didn't bother.
So dies the boy,
By hitting a rock.
But his passage to the sky
Is partially blocked.
The angel watches,
And decides on revenge.
She calls to power,
Ånd gives up her soul,
Just so to his death,
The father will roll.
As He looks down,
The daddy frowns,
And falls into the water.
The angel cries,
As her innocence dies,
And the little boy flies up.
He looks down and back at the sky,
Wondering why,
The beautiful angel no longer flies.
She has her wings, once white,
Now black, and darkest hair of all.
She's been cursed and alone,
And bound for Hell,
Ever since she took the fall.



Copyright © flamingblade ... [ 2007-03-07 12:13:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Malcolmsdreamgirl on Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 01:12:22 PM AEST
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wow .. this was so sad ..........................

meaningful ... yet so so sad

Keep writing


Dee xx


Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 01:15:28 PM AEST
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very well written.. its so sad.. its a good short lil story and so true.. revenge is never satisfying in the end.. vampyress Jenni


Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 05:01:25 PM AEST
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beautiful write
the dedication of heart
from our guardian seen
to do anything for our part.


Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 12:18:45 AM AEST
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Sad and nobody wins...

J~


Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Roddy on Monday, 5th May 2008 @ 01:48:44 AM AEST
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I agree revenge really does cost everything.


Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by -Nik-91- on Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 12:19:53 AM AEST
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wow love your poem
its so sad yet it feels real

keep writting

nikki xxx




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