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Array ( [sid] => 13246 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Make me [time] => 2003-02-24 23:00:00 [hometext] => For anyone who wants to be something else or somewhere else...a prayer [bodytext] => Make me a ripple in the vast blue ocean,
Make me a dove in the setting sky,
Make me a poppy dancing in the breeze,
Make me wings and let me fly.

Make me a fine wine, aged and divine,
Make me the sunshine on a cloudless day,
Make me the hope of a war torn country,
Make me a light to shine the way.

Make me a sweet note of a playing harp,
Make me a tear drop on a gentle face,
Make me the heart of a joyful angel,
Make me one voice for the entire human race.

Make me the courage of a determined athlete,
Make me a wild horse, galloping free,
Make me a companion on a Winter's night,
Make me thankful for being me. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 19 [informant] => CowgirlKid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Make me

Contributed by CowgirlKid on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Make me a ripple in the vast blue ocean,
Make me a dove in the setting sky,
Make me a poppy dancing in the breeze,
Make me wings and let me fly.

Make me a fine wine, aged and divine,
Make me the sunshine on a cloudless day,
Make me the hope of a war torn country,
Make me a light to shine the way.

Make me a sweet note of a playing harp,
Make me a tear drop on a gentle face,
Make me the heart of a joyful angel,
Make me one voice for the entire human race.

Make me the courage of a determined athlete,
Make me a wild horse, galloping free,
Make me a companion on a Winter's night,
Make me thankful for being me.

Copyright © CowgirlKid ... [ 2003-02-24 23:00:00]
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Re: Make me (User Rating: 1 )
by LJ on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 11:09:48 PM AEST
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This is really good. I have often prayed that same prayer....well written

Re: Make me (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 11:14:54 PM AEST
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What a great prayer,Beautifully done!
Something I should be saying to night!
Christina

Re: Make me (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanna on Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 09:59:22 AM AEST
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This is absolutely BEAUTIFUL! I'm really enjoying reading your posts!

Re: Make me (User Rating: 1 )
by CowgirlKid on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 07:57:25 AM AEST
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Thanks Tanna..makes me want to keep on writing when people like my poems!

Re: Make me (User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 02:16:45 PM AEST
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Hello, CowgirlKid, How are you doing? I had no idea what this poem would be about when I clicked on the title, but Wow! For now, this is my FAVORITE ONE!
Love, Great-grandma Bizzy

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