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Array ( [sid] => 132409 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Vivid Picture. [time] => 2007-03-05 18:21:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Blood drips from my lips
And paints a vivid picture of you
I close my eyes and I see you clear
It feels like you're lying here
Your body around mine, so tightly wound
Lost in your memories is where I'm found
I miss how you would touch me slow
Like your fingertips might never let me go
Into my imagination, into my pulsing veins
Within my aching heart you seem to ease the pain
Beneath the Surface of my skin
Is this loneliness that I'm lost within
The feel of you still lingers on
I still taste you on my lips eventhough your gone
Your the perfect kiss always resting on the tip of my tongue
The very breath inside my lungs
Yet here I sit broken, cold to the touch
Lost without you, I miss you so much
I begged, screamed and prayed you would come back
I stayed true to your heart as my world went black
I love you so much I don't know what else to do
So I'll just rest here and let the love bleed through...
Painting a vivd picture of you. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 22 [informant] => bleedthelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

A Vivid Picture.

Contributed by bleedthelove on Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 06:21:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Blood drips from my lips
And paints a vivid picture of you
I close my eyes and I see you clear
It feels like you're lying here
Your body around mine, so tightly wound
Lost in your memories is where I'm found
I miss how you would touch me slow
Like your fingertips might never let me go
Into my imagination, into my pulsing veins
Within my aching heart you seem to ease the pain
Beneath the Surface of my skin
Is this loneliness that I'm lost within
The feel of you still lingers on
I still taste you on my lips eventhough your gone
Your the perfect kiss always resting on the tip of my tongue
The very breath inside my lungs
Yet here I sit broken, cold to the touch
Lost without you, I miss you so much
I begged, screamed and prayed you would come back
I stayed true to your heart as my world went black
I love you so much I don't know what else to do
So I'll just rest here and let the love bleed through...
Painting a vivd picture of you.

Copyright © bleedthelove ... [ 2007-03-05 18:21:53]
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Re: A Vivid Picture. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 07:11:55 PM AEST
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wow a marvelous written picture of a memory of a great love.. beautifully and eloquently written.. great job here

vampyress jenni

Re: A Vivid Picture. (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 08:18:11 PM AEST
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such beautiful words amidst such sorrow. what a truly remarkable poem you've written. thanks for sharing.

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