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Array ( [sid] => 132393 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When Night Falls [time] => 2007-03-05 08:28:59 [hometext] => written on a clear night in the summer of 2006 [bodytext] => Shadows grow long, as the sun falls low.
in this moment the existence of space and time will cease.
Darkness overtakes the landscape, and he finds himself at peace.
The tranquil night will save him from his woe.

High above the earth is a beautiful show
sparkling in the sky, filling the endless expanse,
He knows that with each star comes a new hope and a new chance.
And the mere thought sets his heart aglow.

silver moonlight falls down upon the world below.
laying on the cool grass, he searches for an answer to his prayer.
day will soon break, he has been awake all night but does not care.
Will the day bring the answer he seeks? Only one way to know.

And so, on he goes, praying for whats real to be a dream,
and what is a dream to be real. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 2 [informant] => theshark1019 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

When Night Falls

Contributed by theshark1019 on Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 08:28:59 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Shadows grow long, as the sun falls low.
in this moment the existence of space and time will cease.
Darkness overtakes the landscape, and he finds himself at peace.
The tranquil night will save him from his woe.

High above the earth is a beautiful show
sparkling in the sky, filling the endless expanse,
He knows that with each star comes a new hope and a new chance.
And the mere thought sets his heart aglow.

silver moonlight falls down upon the world below.
laying on the cool grass, he searches for an answer to his prayer.
day will soon break, he has been awake all night but does not care.
Will the day bring the answer he seeks? Only one way to know.

And so, on he goes, praying for whats real to be a dream,
and what is a dream to be real.

Copyright © theshark1019 ... [ 2007-03-05 08:28:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: When Night Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 11:00:00 AM AEST
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this is a very well expressed piece I enjoyed reading it.. welcome to the site.. very well written

vampyress jenni

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