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Hey you

w/o a clue...

Do you even remember coming unglued

You'll be spared

having to care...

For as long as you sport that vacant stare

Medicate

& situate...

Your accommodations w/ the state

Within this gloom

nothing blooms...

And here at last, we've come to your room

Hung 'til dead

is what is said...

Of the girl whose blood now stains your bed

Never clever

to endever...

A return to the life, from which now severed

No more love

from above...

For what is now, only a shell of

Hey you

w/o a clue...

Do you even remember, coming unglued

Wake Up!

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!Hey You!

Contributed by FrogHoppin on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 09:06:08 PM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry

Wake Up!

Hey you

w/o a clue...

Do you even remember coming unglued

You'll be spared

having to care...

For as long as you sport that vacant stare

Medicate

& situate...

Your accommodations w/ the state

Within this gloom

nothing blooms...

And here at last, we've come to your room

Hung 'til dead

is what is said...

Of the girl whose blood now stains your bed

Never clever

to endever...

A return to the life, from which now severed

No more love

from above...

For what is now, only a shell of

Hey you

w/o a clue...

Do you even remember, coming unglued

Wake Up!

Copyright © FrogHoppin ... [ 2007-02-20 21:06:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: !Hey You! (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 09:25:01 PM AEST
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I hear this in the morning just before I wake up it was issued as an alarm clock instead of a buzzer.

This piece also brought me to the obligatory title:

Don't give in without a fight.
Open your heart, I'm coming home.
And the worms ate into his brain.
Together we stand, divided we fall.

Just the last lines to honor striving for a clue.

Good Job

Peace
Yang

Re: !Hey You! (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 11:11:06 AM AEST
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Great...it does have a flow...and I love the rhyme...Well done

Re: !Hey You! (User Rating: 1 )
by CuriousitysCat on Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 09:59:33 PM AEST
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YAY!!!! Whoa, I love it, like most of your writing. ;]
"For as long as you sport that vacant stare

Medicate

& situate... "
Yessssss, it works every now and then for a bit until you turn around to see you been bitten, bitten on the ASS! But hey some are completely satisfied in their vicious circle. It can be enticing sometimes...Oh no relapse. Oops well it all makes sense. Love it!

Buh-bye,
~ME

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