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Array ( [sid] => 131665 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Still Bleeding [time] => 2007-02-12 12:57:48 [hometext] => I still don't understand. [bodytext] => Still bleeding is my heart, so much to say but no one to listen.
How did you grow so far apart, putting me in an unforgivable position.
Unable to give a reason, you still think I shouldn't care.
But I do, so much more then you know, but life I guess is not fair.
You could never look below the surface, to see what was inside.
You are not honest, you have no integrity, you don't even have your pride.
So stripped down to nothing, what can you say?
Nothing, so predictable, because there is no one left to blame.
Persecuted by so many, because I still care for you.
Friends, family, even acquaintances tell me to find someone new.
My heart still bleeds, telling me the truth.
What I felt, what I feel for you, just had to be true.
So just do what you do best, forget about me.
That is the only way you know, when it's easy.
Just live the life that is not yours, as you have done so long before.
It's so much easier just to give in to what he wants.
Be fake, be superficial, and shallow while your at it.
Conform to his every need, though you already regret it.
No remorse for stabbing me in my heart, and whatching it bleed.
Thats exactly what it will do, until i'm no longer me. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 22 [informant] => kims4ever [notes] => ....edited for spelling as requested...mod_6 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Still Bleeding

Contributed by kims4ever on Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 12:57:48 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Still bleeding is my heart, so much to say but no one to listen.
How did you grow so far apart, putting me in an unforgivable position.
Unable to give a reason, you still think I shouldn't care.
But I do, so much more then you know, but life I guess is not fair.
You could never look below the surface, to see what was inside.
You are not honest, you have no integrity, you don't even have your pride.
So stripped down to nothing, what can you say?
Nothing, so predictable, because there is no one left to blame.
Persecuted by so many, because I still care for you.
Friends, family, even acquaintances tell me to find someone new.
My heart still bleeds, telling me the truth.
What I felt, what I feel for you, just had to be true.
So just do what you do best, forget about me.
That is the only way you know, when it's easy.
Just live the life that is not yours, as you have done so long before.
It's so much easier just to give in to what he wants.
Be fake, be superficial, and shallow while your at it.
Conform to his every need, though you already regret it.
No remorse for stabbing me in my heart, and whatching it bleed.
Thats exactly what it will do, until i'm no longer me.




Copyright © kims4ever ... [ 2007-02-12 12:57:48]
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Re: Still Bleeding (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 01:02:44 PM AEST
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this is so sad.. sometimes people hurt us and it doesn't seem to have a reason but I think you will find someone way better.. give yourself time.. this is a very well expressed write..

don't worry things always get better. and it will make you stronger

vampyress Jenni


Re: Still Bleeding (User Rating: 1 )
by Soccerflyer27 on Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 04:52:14 PM AEST
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I can't relate 100% to this write. I've been there, where they stab your heart, and make it bleed, then they forget about you, uncaring. It's not a good feeling at all, and this poem reflects those feelings. Great job!

Soccerflyer27


Re: Still Bleeding (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 03:40:17 PM AEST
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A very sad but lovely poem.You will find the person that's meant for you in the right time and place.Everything in live happens for a reason.You will release your past love...all in time, and so make space for new to enter your life.Time heals all wounds.Hang in there..




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