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Why was this relationship build on a lie
After what you did my heart and soul wants to die

I would have gave you the world and more
But seem quick to show my heart the door
I would have walked through hell and back

You were something special tome
Now I sit here and wonder what my life would be
I hope one day you will remember what you did to me
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Why Would You

Contributed by jmpy84 on Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 09:43:31 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I look in the mirror and watch your love pass me by
Why was this relationship build on a lie
After what you did my heart and soul wants to die

I would have gave you the world and more
But seem quick to show my heart the door
I would have walked through hell and back

You were something special tome
Now I sit here and wonder what my life would be
I hope one day you will remember what you did to me

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Re: Why Would You (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 10:17:11 PM AEST
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jmpy84, this is a sad reality for many as so many people are always on the take without or never giving back. I felt this poem strongly as this type of situation happens more than people give credit too. Now I want to Thank you for sharing such a real emotional piece with us all and for giving us all a tad of your creative personality in poetic form. Sad but great poem.

Mickey Pig Knuckles

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Re: Why Would You (User Rating: 1 )
by jdawg on Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 01:05:40 AM AEST
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although short, it said so much, and I have been in your shoes trust me, It seemed like I gave up everthing for her, I loved her unconditionaly and in return all I got was lies and heartache. as though I learned with time wounds do eventially heal, but It's so hard to wait for that time, that you feel nothing more then to just give up hope of love, but do through time and shoulders of others, heal eventually it does. great write, thank you for sharing, I wish you the best for now and the future.
always
Justin

Re: Why Would You (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 02:51:20 AM AEST
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Oh dearest Josh~ I'm so sorry for all the pain you are going through hun. Sue *hugs* Josh so tight. I know how much you loved her. You are a wonderful guy Josh and you deserve somebody who will treat you with love & respect. Don't keep doing this to yourself my friend. Sadly she has only caused you heartache & strife. Time will heal your wounds and you have many friends who will help you get through this. I am always here for you. Email me, I need to know that you're okay. Your write leaves me with a heavy heart my friend.May time heal your wounds much sooner than later.
with love, hugs n prayers,
sue m

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