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[sid] => 131569
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => If
[time] => 2007-02-09 11:43:02
[hometext] => I just want to scream between the tears...
[bodytext] => Never fell to soft dreams
a Mother`s touch
pretty little things
baby girls think of.
Tattered and torn
sent to the freezing night
little baby girl tracks
led off through the snow,
into the dark.
Just a short distance
you`ll be warm
tiny baby girl tracks to the edge of the woods,
She died.
I must believe your safe now,
and reason why no hand to save you.
God might make me an angel,
I would fall avenging you.
And you who sent her crying
cold, and to her death,
would see no angel coming
at yours,
but me...if.
The hunger would be insatiable
your moment would never die....Vincent
The man" hit her and set her on the front porch
she was just 2yrs old...
[I run with some hard-core ***-kickin" guys,
and would have given their lives before the fall of this child. Each would have taken their turn warming her "till frozen." That keeps my faith in my fellow man]
[comments] => 9
[counter] => 298
[topic] => 48
[informant] => Crow
[notes] => ....edited for language...mod_6
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 18
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => EmotionalPoetry
)
If
Contributed by
Crow
on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 11:43:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Never fell to soft dreams
a Mother`s touch
pretty little things
baby girls think of.
Tattered and torn
sent to the freezing night
little baby girl tracks
led off through the snow,
into the dark.
Just a short distance
you`ll be warm
tiny baby girl tracks to the edge of the woods,
She died.
I must believe your safe now,
and reason why no hand to save you.
God might make me an angel,
I would fall avenging you.
And you who sent her crying
cold, and to her death,
would see no angel coming
at yours,
but me...if.
The hunger would be insatiable
your moment would never die....Vincent
The man" hit her and set her on the front porch
she was just 2yrs old...
[I run with some hard-core ***-kickin" guys,
and would have given their lives before the fall of this child. Each would have taken their turn warming her "till frozen." That keeps my faith in my fellow man]
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Crow
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2007-02-09 11:43:02]
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Re: If
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 12:45:24 PM AEST
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wow this is a really sad poem.. this made me cry.. this is very well put into words.. my heart goes out to this little child.. im sure she is in heaven now with god.. beauitful write
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Re: If
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by shelby on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 01:34:32 PM AEST
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Oh Hun,
this brought me to tears, no rhyme or reason to the injustice done to children. You must tell me more about this later today when you return. Written with a soft beautiful touch as you always do.
hugsss
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Re: If
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by DrowningHeart on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 01:35:48 PM AEST
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My little girl is my life....this poem certainly brought tears to my eyes.
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Re: If
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 01:43:48 PM AEST
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A Klingon Death Scream from this commenter with a hand hard working the bellow upon the flame of justice may it burn bright to consume the murderer and his like. A pox upon any who would so harm a child. This piece quickly evoked an emotional response it is deadly effective by passing judges and court rooms to provoke mob rule.
Peace
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Re: If
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by Crow on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 03:17:06 PM AEST
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Thank you Jenni
thanks Shel, I`ll tell you the story..
thank you...D children are the future..what she might have gave we`ll never know
yangdantien thank you for reading me,
there is a quote by Gandi
"if all thought..eye for an eye,
there would be no humanity" thats not exact, but I try to remember little things like that.
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Re: If
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by Linds on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 03:33:24 PM AEST
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wow, that's sad. but its beautiful and very well written.
Lindsay |
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Re: If
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 04:32:53 PM AEST
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Oh my gosh Vincent, I cried and cried for this poor child. How can anybody be so inhumane and so cruel.
She is an angel up in heaven now.
An emotionally packed poem that pulls at the heart strings.
Blessings to you & yours my friend.
big hugs & prayers,
dreamer |
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Re: If
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 06:16:51 PM AEST
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Vincent .. I .. I truly wanted to comment .. but words fail ....
I was reminded of so many things upon reading this ..
(and not very pleasant thoughts)
but that was the point, no? To bring the truth of what this world
has fallen to, it seems .. I am in complete agreement with
the fellow commenters on this page .. would that we could
change fate .. or at least right all the wrongs. NEVER would
a child ever hurt .. or (God forbid) die ~
such sadness ..
~Breezy |
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Re: If
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 03:03:48 AM AEST
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omg...........
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