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Array ( [sid] => 131495 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I dont know if I like this boy [time] => 2007-02-07 14:03:27 [hometext] => Umm so I have recently been dating this boy, I dont know maybe he is moving too fast for me, or maybe I should be moving faster for him. but I am scared and here is a poem about us *please read and comments are good too* [bodytext] => I don’t know
If I really like him.
He is so sweet
So nice
But I don’t know
if I like this boy.

He can take care of me
Look over me
Help me with my pains
But I don’t know
If I like this boy.

He sings to me
Lyrics that just come to him
Singing my name softly
As if it were the last word
He hopes to have spoken
But I don’t know
If I like this boy.

When he touches me
Softly
As if I was fragile
Lovingly
As if I was his forever
But I don’t know
If I like this boy.

Whispering softly to me
How beautiful I am
How lucky he is
But I don’t know
If I like this boy.
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I dont know if I like this boy

Contributed by shattered_soul on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 02:03:27 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I don’t know
If I really like him.
He is so sweet
So nice
But I don’t know
if I like this boy.

He can take care of me
Look over me
Help me with my pains
But I don’t know
If I like this boy.

He sings to me
Lyrics that just come to him
Singing my name softly
As if it were the last word
He hopes to have spoken
But I don’t know
If I like this boy.

When he touches me
Softly
As if I was fragile
Lovingly
As if I was his forever
But I don’t know
If I like this boy.

Whispering softly to me
How beautiful I am
How lucky he is
But I don’t know
If I like this boy.

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Re: I dont know if I like this boy (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 03:21:27 PM AEST
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shattered_soul, I enjoyed this poem and say to let your heart be your guide. It will speak to you if you are in tune and listening. Thank You for sharing a little of yourself and especially your gift of poetry with us all. Nice poem.

Mickey Pig Knuckles

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Re: I dont know if I like this boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 03:40:56 PM AEST
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If he moves too fast for you, then he is being self-centered, and doesn't truly care for you. Don't move any faster than you need to, and if he must needs adjust, so be it.

Keep writing. This has a nice flow to it.

Andrew

Re: I dont know if I like this boy (User Rating: 1 )
by UnfallenTears on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 07:18:20 PM AEST
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Babe, don't move faster than you need to. Everyone has their own pace.

But I really like the poem. The repitition is used well. And the flow is really good.

You should definitely keep writing.

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