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No need for Flowers in effection
No need for talk of destruction
Nor understanding for direction

I am a fool
Just for the knowing
You are watching

I lost my soul
out running my mouth
Just from talking

I am the fool
Out of my soul

Ranting & Raving
Raving to save
All that they gave
In order for me
To have the time
To find a smile

I am a fool
Simply finding me
In the attention pool
Because I believe

All I want is your attention

I am a fool
Just to know you are watching

I lost my soul
All just from talking

& I don't need you effection

These are the rules

I am only stating

These are the tools

That keep me calm and soothing

But like illusions they pull

The stars are lovely
Even over a moon so full

I am just stating
These are my tools

& pain is just an illussion
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Attention

Contributed by rhei76 on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 01:34:46 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

All I want is your attention
No need for Flowers in effection
No need for talk of destruction
Nor understanding for direction

I am a fool
Just for the knowing
You are watching

I lost my soul
out running my mouth
Just from talking

I am the fool
Out of my soul

Ranting & Raving
Raving to save
All that they gave
In order for me
To have the time
To find a smile

I am a fool
Simply finding me
In the attention pool
Because I believe

All I want is your attention

I am a fool
Just to know you are watching

I lost my soul
All just from talking

& I don't need you effection

These are the rules

I am only stating

These are the tools

That keep me calm and soothing

But like illusions they pull

The stars are lovely
Even over a moon so full

I am just stating
These are my tools

& pain is just an illussion

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2007-02-07 13:34:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Attention (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 02:19:15 PM AEST
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a most convincing carthasus, beautifuly honest and sincerely humble. In all a most
meaningful peice of writting, one that stems truly from the soul.

myheartsvoice

thank you kindly for you comment

Re: Attention (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 03:05:44 PM AEST
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a very honest felt write.. everyone needs a bit of attention sometimes.. well put into words

vampyress jenni

Re: Attention (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 03:09:33 PM AEST
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rhei76, I really enjoyed the depthness of your composure here as its meaning became crystal clear. Thank you for sharing your talent of poetic literature and for giving us all a little of your very creative personality. Wonderful poem.

I also want to Thank you for giving me a moment of your time and then leaving a little of yourself through your awesome comment.

Mickey Pig Knuckles

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Re: Attention (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 07:00:19 AM AEST
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Honest and deep. I liked this and I liked how you described yourself in this. Great poem. I really liked this..

Take care
Christina-xo

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