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closeness

of you i always

feel no matter what

i do,

for

in my

heart is

where i keep

the sweetest

part of

you.

The

closeness

of you is everywhere

seen only by these eye's,

felt amidst this life we share

our love has no demise.

The

closeness

of you is always

with me i carry it

day and night, like a

spiritual being inside

my soul you are

my guiding

light.

The

closeness

of you is never

gone as long as i

can feel,

your

my dream

at night and

my kiss at

dawn

in

my heart

your all that's

real.

myheartsvoice
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The Closeness Of You

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 07:22:17 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The

closeness

of you i always

feel no matter what

i do,

for

in my

heart is

where i keep

the sweetest

part of

you.

The

closeness

of you is everywhere

seen only by these eye's,

felt amidst this life we share

our love has no demise.

The

closeness

of you is always

with me i carry it

day and night, like a

spiritual being inside

my soul you are

my guiding

light.

The

closeness

of you is never

gone as long as i

can feel,

your

my dream

at night and

my kiss at

dawn

in

my heart

your all that's

real.

myheartsvoice

Copyright © myheartsvoice ... [ 2007-02-04 19:22:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Closeness Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 08:06:18 PM AEST
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I like the style of this.. beautifully done and well worded.. great expression of love and devotion

vampyress jenni

Re: The Closeness Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 12:59:58 AM AEST
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myheartsvoice, You are one fine poet and so very appreciated by many for sharing your gift with all. The format and especially the message of this poem is so emotionally beautiful. Thank You.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :)

Re: The Closeness Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 12:07:03 PM AEST
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How fortunate whoever is:
"...for

in my

heart is

where i keep

the sweetest

part of

you..."

Ah I must admit I did a mental 'Snoopy' dance as this is real loving, the art holding the best of the other deep within our hearts.

Well Done

Peace
Yang

Re: The Closeness Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 12:45:11 PM AEST
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The form of this poem is beautiful and the words are so sweet and honest. You have a real gift for writing poetry,

Dom

Re: The Closeness Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 01:50:23 PM AEST
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so passionate

i wish some one had the elegance to write something like this to me.

Re: The Closeness Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 04:57:23 PM AEST
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This was completely beautiful .. the title drew me in
and the continuity of that theme was soft and lovely ..

throughout your writes, your amazing heart breaks
free and dances across your pages .. it's entirely
marvelous. Your work (style and topic), reminds
me so much of another poet who used to frequent
this site. His romantic pieces were a thing to behold.
As are yours .. exquisite~

~Breezy

Re: The Closeness Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 12:47:58 PM AEST
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"All love should be celebrated w/ such uncompromised sincerity..." she manages before swooning...ahhh...

Great Job & might I say once again how beautiful the picture of your wife shared w/ us on your page!!!

BigLoveMuchPeace
~Misfitme

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