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take me to a place,where I may rest,
take me to a place, that no one can else can see
take me my love into your heart,
show me a place where I can be at peace,
and know that you will alway's cover me. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 270 [topic] => 62 [informant] => BOZEEN [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => spiritual )

TAKE ME HOME

Contributed by BOZEEN on Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 02:15:47 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

Take me to a place,where my heart will not hurt
take me to a place,where I may rest,
take me to a place, that no one can else can see
take me my love into your heart,
show me a place where I can be at peace,
and know that you will alway's cover me.

Copyright © BOZEEN ... [ 2007-01-28 14:15:47]
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Re: TAKE ME HOME (User Rating: 1 )
by silverscent on Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 02:18:27 PM AEST
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Very sweet write. I think the repetition works well, and the length is just right for the subject and message of this poem.
I will say though, if you don't mind, the fourth line could do with a couple of commas to aid the flow and delivery of the line...maybe something like "take me, my love, into your heart."
Great poem, keep it up.

Re: TAKE ME HOME (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 05:07:37 PM AEST
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I really think this is an inspiring hopeful piece.. its short but a very expressive write.. great job

vampyress Jenni

Re: TAKE ME HOME (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 11:31:07 PM AEST
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This comes to me as prayer said, rather, sung aloud from the rooftop over looking a city at night. Tight and heartfelt.

Peace
Yang

Re: TAKE ME HOME (User Rating: 1 )
by joe-joe on Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 09:36:55 AM AEST
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I like the place this write took my heart...nice write...

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