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[aid] => mick
[title] => A bad dream
[time] => 2007-01-10 10:00:32
[hometext] => i wrote this because i had a bad dream last night so this is what came from my mind to the paper
[bodytext] => Bad dreams I cannot take
they make me bleed from the inside
feeling an ache
panic stricken
waking in fear
making sure those monsters in my sleep aren't anywhere near
vampyress Jenni
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A bad dream
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Phantomvampyress
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Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 10:00:32 AM in AEST
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Bad dreams I cannot take
they make me bleed from the inside
feeling an ache
panic stricken
waking in fear
making sure those monsters in my sleep aren't anywhere near
vampyress Jenni
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Phantomvampyress
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2007-01-10 10:00:32]
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Re: A bad dream
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 10:25:15 AM AEST
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Jenny, Short and to the point. I can relate. I have a couple of recurrent nightmares, which I need to figure out why I have them. It is a truly an unpleasant experience.
Peace and hugs,
Laura (good luck with yours) |
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Re: A bad dream
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 12:23:41 PM AEST
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mmm...the paramnesia...and lucid moments.
I comprehend, completely...
These moments like dark crystals that steal the light from us.
Thank you for reminding me.
The pain of everything.
-Natalie. |
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Re: A bad dream
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 06:59:00 PM AEST
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Ok wow.. Well Done felt the chill of it....
This may be one reason why we seek to marry?
Perhaps avoid eating and liquids at least 4 hours before sleep...
I Bid You Sweet Dreams
Peace
Yang |
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Re: A bad dream
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 08:29:47 PM AEST
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Quite chilling bad dreams can be, makes one wonder is not the dream realy the reality and waking up from it, is just the escape? this is a good reminder and nicely put. good idea to write it to paper.
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Re: A bad dream
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 10:38:42 PM AEST
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| woo! this is way to real, good work. Crow |
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Re: A bad dream
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 10:50:56 PM AEST
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JenStar~ short and to the point. I have had many reoccuring nightmares. I think there must be a reason why we see them, but I don't have the answer to that. Great write. Well done.
love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: A bad dream
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by Epic on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 01:14:41 AM AEST
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| short and gets the point across, good write. I hate bad dreams to. They ruin my nights. |
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Re: A bad dream
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by europeanprincess on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 06:06:32 PM AEST
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| ive been there yet sometimes i dont want to remember them and they never get down on paper. yet again i have been inspired though. there is one dream that i have over and over again and maybe i will be able to write it down very soon. thank you for sharing. |
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Re: A bad dream
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by Loriann on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 11:25:50 AM AEST
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I liked it I have to agree short and too the point. I hate nightmares . Can remember the bad dreams but cannot remember the good ones.
Very nice work
Loriann |
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