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Array ( [sid] => 129695 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'll Be Waiting [time] => 2006-12-22 10:46:43 [hometext] => Really Bad Poem but there is some truth in it so it's worth posting (I think I've censored it effectively mod's, sorry if I missed one) [bodytext] => I’m done with her
I’m tired of feeling like this
I’m tired of caring so much and you so little
I’d do anything for you and you can’t do **** for me
I’ve decided that if I’m going to **** it up, I might as well do it fully and in style
That’s going to be the difference this time, this last time
I’m not letting it fade away, I’m going out with a bang
That’ll be my ******* contribution to this world
I hate that you don’t see he can’t love you like I do
He can’t and won’t get you the way I get you
He can’t truly appreciate how great you are and love you despite how horrible you can be
That’s what I like to think anyways
I hate that I can’t stop caring about you
I need so badly to matter to someone in this world
I need to matter to you
What have I done to displease my miss?
I’m ******* done being a nice guy
All it gets you is **** on
Hell hath no fury like my ******* indignation

Then I remember to breathe
That this feeling will pass
That I refuse to let you turn me into this person
That it’s not you, it’s me
You can’t make someone give a **** about you
You can’t make someone care
I just wish you hadn’t led me on
Pretending to want to be my friend
Maybe you didn’t, that it is just your way
It’s happened so many times that it must be me
I know if I could start over again, it would end the same way

Just know that no matter what, I will always be here for you
If your darkness and pain every become too much to bear, you will not be alone
I don’t think the life you’ve chosen will lead you to what you need but I hope I’m wrong
I hope you can find the happiness and peace that will ever elude me and that you deserve
I hope he can give you what you want
I hope that you can forget about me
As the years go on, and I am nothing to you but a bad memory, and if your life has gone the way I fear it will, I hope you can remember this stupid poem

And I’ll be waiting



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I'll Be Waiting

Contributed by Trauma on Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 10:46:43 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I’m done with her
I’m tired of feeling like this
I’m tired of caring so much and you so little
I’d do anything for you and you can’t do **** for me
I’ve decided that if I’m going to **** it up, I might as well do it fully and in style
That’s going to be the difference this time, this last time
I’m not letting it fade away, I’m going out with a bang
That’ll be my ******* contribution to this world
I hate that you don’t see he can’t love you like I do
He can’t and won’t get you the way I get you
He can’t truly appreciate how great you are and love you despite how horrible you can be
That’s what I like to think anyways
I hate that I can’t stop caring about you
I need so badly to matter to someone in this world
I need to matter to you
What have I done to displease my miss?
I’m ******* done being a nice guy
All it gets you is **** on
Hell hath no fury like my ******* indignation

Then I remember to breathe
That this feeling will pass
That I refuse to let you turn me into this person
That it’s not you, it’s me
You can’t make someone give a **** about you
You can’t make someone care
I just wish you hadn’t led me on
Pretending to want to be my friend
Maybe you didn’t, that it is just your way
It’s happened so many times that it must be me
I know if I could start over again, it would end the same way

Just know that no matter what, I will always be here for you
If your darkness and pain every become too much to bear, you will not be alone
I don’t think the life you’ve chosen will lead you to what you need but I hope I’m wrong
I hope you can find the happiness and peace that will ever elude me and that you deserve
I hope he can give you what you want
I hope that you can forget about me
As the years go on, and I am nothing to you but a bad memory, and if your life has gone the way I fear it will, I hope you can remember this stupid poem

And I’ll be waiting







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Re: I'll Be Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by blackprayer on Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 12:14:29 PM AEST
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Wow. Very emotional and powerful. I liked the wording and the way you pieced it together. :)


Re: I'll Be Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 02:17:53 PM AEST
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this is a very powerful and emotional write..well expression of hurt and anger into one.. however I will tell you this.. don't wait for someone who isn't worth it and doesn't return love.. you will only hurt yourself in the end. you will find the right person when the time is right.

vampyress Jenni


Re: I'll Be Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by BrokenSavior on Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 03:28:56 PM AEST
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I relate on this poem in every way possible. I have been going through this myself. Sleepless nights and tears are my only companions to keep me warm at night. Don't set yourself up to get knocked down. Let time heal you and you can stand stronger. (If this poem is about you)
BrokenSavior




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