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Array ( [sid] => 129633 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eternally Tainted [time] => 2006-12-20 17:47:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The crimson-stained sun has illuminated everything
Present and past is what i have imagined within this twilight
More than my own hands can accomplish

Please teach me how to live
A little more vulnerably than i do now
Won't you help me just a little?
That way, even if i get hurt
And lose everything around me
Your strength will flow through my heart

This dispute will probably go on
About what is most precious
I've become a rebel, I've overlooked things
Even the gentle smiles of strangers

If eternity knows what manner of darkness
And when pain will vanish,
Then that way, you shall taint me
I looked always to yesterday, to the castles in the sky
When will I be able to follow them?
My strength shall be my guide

Now, please, help me just a little
Please, just corrupt me, only a little

Death shall be my guide.
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Eternally Tainted

Contributed by trackiller2006 on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 05:47:01 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



The crimson-stained sun has illuminated everything
Present and past is what i have imagined within this twilight
More than my own hands can accomplish

Please teach me how to live
A little more vulnerably than i do now
Won't you help me just a little?
That way, even if i get hurt
And lose everything around me
Your strength will flow through my heart

This dispute will probably go on
About what is most precious
I've become a rebel, I've overlooked things
Even the gentle smiles of strangers

If eternity knows what manner of darkness
And when pain will vanish,
Then that way, you shall taint me
I looked always to yesterday, to the castles in the sky
When will I be able to follow them?
My strength shall be my guide

Now, please, help me just a little
Please, just corrupt me, only a little

Death shall be my guide.




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Re: Eternally Tainted (User Rating: 1 )
by RLSS on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 06:25:51 PM AEST
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"Please, just corrupt me, only a little"
Really great line, so conflicted, with that mix of a bit of everything that describes the line between transitions.
And...er...you didn't capitalize two of the "I"s in your poem... sorry. I can't help it!


Re: Eternally Tainted (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 10:14:35 AM AEST
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amazing write..so relatable too. i loved it as i do all of your work.;)




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