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You're insulting my friend because he dropped out of school.
You called him a moron, an idiot, and a pinhead too.
You'd better apologize or I'll beat the hell out of you.
Tears come to his eyes when he hears the words that you use.
He's a human being and doesn't deserve to be abused.
Dropping out of school was a mistake.
But you cruely insult him and that's something he shouldn't have to take.
If you insult him one more time, I'll make you pay the price.
If you're considering insulting any other people who dropped out of school, you'd better think twice.
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I'll make you pay the price

Contributed by randyjohnson on Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 08:47:57 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

What you're doing is nasty and cruel.
You're insulting my friend because he dropped out of school.
You called him a moron, an idiot, and a pinhead too.
You'd better apologize or I'll beat the hell out of you.
Tears come to his eyes when he hears the words that you use.
He's a human being and doesn't deserve to be abused.
Dropping out of school was a mistake.
But you cruely insult him and that's something he shouldn't have to take.
If you insult him one more time, I'll make you pay the price.
If you're considering insulting any other people who dropped out of school, you'd better think twice.

Copyright © randyjohnson ... [ 2006-12-12 08:47:57]
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Re: I'll make you pay the price (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 08:24:38 AM AEST
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This was good.. .Good use of emotions...

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Merry Christmas
Christina

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