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Array ( [sid] => 129284 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Calm [time] => 2006-12-11 14:44:51 [hometext] => I wrote this poem in bed one night. My GCSE Mocks are now over and on that night my mind just went FLUMP. This poem represents that FLUMP more effectively than saying FLUMP! [bodytext] =>

I have thought too much today
My mind has broken down
Like a Clockwork Orange
Strumming images into my mind
Like Wasps about a Bee Hive

Every Night I toss and turn
The quilt explodes
In ravenous rage
As though I only release my
Anger once my soul has
Cooled Below
0o Kelvin

My structure
Churns
My very being in enclosed
Enslaved even
By the calmness I must
Envelope
My voice with
The very nature of my words
Is Ensnared
By Bear traps

I have thought too much today
I must relax
I must sleep
I must awake
To a new
Brighter
Dawn
…
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Calm

Contributed by NDean on Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 02:44:51 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I have thought too much today
My mind has broken down
Like a Clockwork Orange
Strumming images into my mind
Like Wasps about a Bee Hive

Every Night I toss and turn
The quilt explodes
In ravenous rage
As though I only release my
Anger once my soul has
Cooled Below
0o Kelvin

My structure
Churns
My very being in enclosed
Enslaved even
By the calmness I must
Envelope
My voice with
The very nature of my words
Is Ensnared
By Bear traps

I have thought too much today
I must relax
I must sleep
I must awake
To a new
Brighter
Dawn
…

Copyright Â© NDean ... [ 2006-12-11 14:44:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Calm (User Rating: 1 )
by Errious on Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 04:57:14 PM AEST
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cool poem. I like how the phrases at the end give the impression of relaxation. And I think the very end is good too.

Tom

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