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Array ( [sid] => 129136 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stress [time] => 2006-12-07 11:53:25 [hometext] => I wrote this poem after a particular stressful day at school. My Dad thinks some of the lines are not needed however I like it how it is. Some feedback would be helpful so we can solve this spat, he he. [bodytext] => Stress.
It flows like blood
with jagged edge
An anaemic disease
Of the Mind and Soul.
It forms a bubble
A Barrier
A cage with no bars,
a concrete wall
That crushes the body
Of Man
So he Cannot
Breath
Or Sing
Or Speak
Or Think
And the more he cannot think
The more the wall grows thicker
That is Stress
In its impure form
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 48 [informant] => NDean [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Stress

Contributed by NDean on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 11:53:25 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Stress.
It flows like blood
with jagged edge
An anaemic disease
Of the Mind and Soul.
It forms a bubble
A Barrier
A cage with no bars,
a concrete wall
That crushes the body
Of Man
So he Cannot
Breath
Or Sing
Or Speak
Or Think
And the more he cannot think
The more the wall grows thicker
That is Stress
In its impure form

Copyright © NDean ... [ 2006-12-07 11:53:25]
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Re: Stress (User Rating: 1 )
by Errious on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 12:07:19 PM AEST
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I like the poem. Regarding the confrontation between you and your dad, I'm sort of in limbo - half and half. dunno. but cool poem anyway! Well done!
.Sven.

Re: Stress (User Rating: 1 )
by silver_crested_shadow on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 10:57:53 PM AEST
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well i personally think that this poem is good as it is, not going against your dad or anything, just saying to me it all blended together quite nicely.

Re: Stress (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 02:51:17 PM AEST
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wow this is a true piece and very powerful.. its straight on and well put into words on how stress is.. I loved the flow of this .. very powerful piece .. great job.. ENchanting

thanks for sharing

JENNI

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