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Array ( [sid] => 1283 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When [time] => 2002-07-29 06:33:26 [hometext] => For my love. [bodytext] => When Steffi,
will, with our souls,
interlace
as in firefly’s whispers
and day thoughts that haunt me
your shadow that dances
on walls
in my place
Do I dance in your dreams
just as jauntly

When will you
be with me, my lover,
my Pep
with firefly wings
touching fingers,
your breath
and all whispers of time
spent with you,
that I’ve kept
have you thought yet, my love as a dance
to my death

When will you
give me,
My Steffi Renèe
do you, like firefly, wonder
or dream
of our lives together
at night
where we lay
do you think of the love that has yet
to be seen

when, Baby Girl,
will you feed what
I crave
of firefly's hunger and nurished
in drink
life lived as lovers
your words
that I save
the ships on our ocean of love
never sink

firefly © 5.22.02

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Firefly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

When

Contributed by Firefly on Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 06:33:26 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

When Steffi,
will, with our souls,
interlace
as in firefly’s whispers
and day thoughts that haunt me
your shadow that dances
on walls
in my place
Do I dance in your dreams
just as jauntly

When will you
be with me, my lover,
my Pep
with firefly wings
touching fingers,
your breath
and all whispers of time
spent with you,
that I’ve kept
have you thought yet, my love as a dance
to my death

When will you
give me,
My Steffi Renèe
do you, like firefly, wonder
or dream
of our lives together
at night
where we lay
do you think of the love that has yet
to be seen

when, Baby Girl,
will you feed what
I crave
of firefly's hunger and nurished
in drink
life lived as lovers
your words
that I save
the ships on our ocean of love
never sink

firefly © 5.22.02

Copyright Â© Firefly ... [ 2002-07-29 06:33:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:44:41 PM AEST
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a beautiful write, nice flow

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