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I know my soul the Lord will not keep.

If I should die I will not wake,
I know my soul the Lord will not take.

Guard me while I take my journey tonight,
And wake me tortured in Hell’s eternal night.

After these pills my eyes will finally close,
Finish off this bottle for my overdose.

You can try and pray to save my soul,
But God won’t save those with death as a goal.

Hell is where I will lay to rest,
They will all know I was depressed.

Darkness will be my only light,
I’m sorry but I just couldn’t keep up the fight.

I’ll rest somewhere deep where it’s always cold,
Don’t ever say you weren’t told.

It’s time to put an end to all the *****,
All I need is one more slit.

Memories come in black and white,
Telling me my decision is right.

No more day, no more pretend, no more sun,
I can’t keep faking this, I’m done.

Satan, take me with the chains you use to hold me,
All I want is to finally be free.

Free from pain, free from loss, free from hate,
I need it all to end, so now I lay in wait.
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Suicidal Prayer

Contributed by Shadows_In_The_Darkness on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 11:07:28 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Now I lay me down to sleep,
I know my soul the Lord will not keep.

If I should die I will not wake,
I know my soul the Lord will not take.

Guard me while I take my journey tonight,
And wake me tortured in Hell’s eternal night.

After these pills my eyes will finally close,
Finish off this bottle for my overdose.

You can try and pray to save my soul,
But God won’t save those with death as a goal.

Hell is where I will lay to rest,
They will all know I was depressed.

Darkness will be my only light,
I’m sorry but I just couldn’t keep up the fight.

I’ll rest somewhere deep where it’s always cold,
Don’t ever say you weren’t told.

It’s time to put an end to all the *****,
All I need is one more slit.

Memories come in black and white,
Telling me my decision is right.

No more day, no more pretend, no more sun,
I can’t keep faking this, I’m done.

Satan, take me with the chains you use to hold me,
All I want is to finally be free.

Free from pain, free from loss, free from hate,
I need it all to end, so now I lay in wait.




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Re: Suicidal Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 11:30:29 PM AEST
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Very sad, especially since suicide is running rapid on this Planet/
prayer,
emy


Re: Suicidal Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by tearstained_soul on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 01:18:38 AM AEST
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this poem is beautiful... yes i know its about suicide but the way you wrote it.... definatly WOW wrthy, though i do hope you're still alive to read my words and anyone else who've left a comment to praise you b/c there is no denying... this is a good poem. keep rockin and writing babe (but do me a favor andstay alive) :)
britt


Re: Suicidal Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 01:40:47 AM AEST
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brilliant of course, like the rest. this is the fifth suicide one you've posted, though i'm sure thats not news to you. i'm just wondering right now whether or not you've got children....


Re: Suicidal Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by a7x36 on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 09:50:44 PM AEST
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i rlly like how this is written, especially the beginning
favorite line: But God won’t save those with death as a goal.

i've had the same thoughts myself, i rlly feel for you

God bless


Re: Suicidal Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by midsummerdream on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 06:44:53 PM AEST
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wow thats really deep its awesome


Re: Suicidal Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by MemeCaroline on Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 07:15:10 PM AEST
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You have poetic talent. My heart goes out to you because of your pain. I will keep you in my prayers.




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