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The flame begins from a simple spark
Seen within your eye.
Soon, it grows to engulf my frigid heart.

This candle warms my soul and
Lights the way into yours;
Finally, I’m warm, though still too cold to feel.

While it flickers, it burns your memory
Into my mind and soul.
This withered flame is the only hope I have.

The dripping wax reminds me of tears,
For it is undoubtedly a symbol
That, like the candle, our love will surely fade.

This crying candle taunts me,
Screaming volumes of what I shall never have,
Never hold, never be.

So when the candle is extinguished,
And its tears have ceased,
My tears will have just begun…

And I shall lay all of my memories and hopes to rest, yet again.

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Molten Tears

Contributed by wizard on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 10:49:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The flame begins from a simple spark
Seen within your eye.
Soon, it grows to engulf my frigid heart.

This candle warms my soul and
Lights the way into yours;
Finally, I’m warm, though still too cold to feel.

While it flickers, it burns your memory
Into my mind and soul.
This withered flame is the only hope I have.

The dripping wax reminds me of tears,
For it is undoubtedly a symbol
That, like the candle, our love will surely fade.

This crying candle taunts me,
Screaming volumes of what I shall never have,
Never hold, never be.

So when the candle is extinguished,
And its tears have ceased,
My tears will have just begun…

And I shall lay all of my memories and hopes to rest, yet again.

Copyright Â© wizard ... [ 2006-11-15 22:49:58]
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Re: Molten Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 11:17:17 PM AEST
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Paul~ there has always been that special something in your work that touches my heart and soul my dear friend. When I read your work it's as if I can feel your every thought and emotion.
Such sadness evokes my heart to read yet another sad write from you my dear friend. I wish your heart healing my friend and may you find that special someone to make new happy memories with to last a lifetime and beyond~
Heartfelt and touching as always. Take care dearest Paul~
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m

Re: Molten Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 08:47:20 AM AEST
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such a tragic fear of being happy.
Trust fate, if it is meant to be, it shall...if not there will be plenty of time for pain....and hopefully that too shall pass.......

Re: Molten Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 09:51:53 AM AEST
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A nicely written story with tons of powerful emotion.
Very well done
Barkeep!
Larry

Re: Molten Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 12:56:45 AM AEST
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bro..great and simple pentameter in L2, seperating the first stanza.. thus, creating one, so unique: the likes of which, I've never seen from you~
altra-intuitive, I'm sure-

[happenstance of poetic excellence~]

B

Re: Molten Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by epsftbllchic1617 on Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 11:44:04 AM AEST
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I love this title, it is so unique.

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