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Array ( [sid] => 12814 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => SILENT RAIN [time] => 2003-02-17 14:20:00 [hometext] => this was a real life experience out of the blue..and felt i had been taken for a fool ..but we always learn from these experiences [bodytext] => As I walk in the rain
oblivion is my companion
not knowing or caring where I am going
anger makes way for numbness
one question is repeated in my head
WHY?
I thought a joke,then suprise
anger, numb, why? repeated over and over
I loved you for so long, sharing everything
and then tonight you told me it was over
you did not love me
I yell into the night. WHY??
the only response is the soft
pitter patter of rain on the pavement
my tears flow silently with the rain
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SILENT RAIN

Contributed by riverofwords on Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 02:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

As I walk in the rain
oblivion is my companion
not knowing or caring where I am going
anger makes way for numbness
one question is repeated in my head
WHY?
I thought a joke,then suprise
anger, numb, why? repeated over and over
I loved you for so long, sharing everything
and then tonight you told me it was over
you did not love me
I yell into the night. WHY??
the only response is the soft
pitter patter of rain on the pavement
my tears flow silently with the rain

Copyright © riverofwords ... [ 2003-02-17 14:20:00]
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Re: SILENT RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 02:25:42 PM AEST
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Well this happens to the best of us but we learn!
Good peice ! Christina

Re: SILENT RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 04:53:35 PM AEST
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this is so, so good...the ending...it is so beautiful...

Re: SILENT RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 01:22:31 AM AEST
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Drenched in anger and sadness.. Thanks for sharing this one... venkat

Re: SILENT RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 08:25:28 AM AEST
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good write very well said so many of us have been there

Shari

Re: SILENT RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Destiny on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 09:47:24 AM AEST
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great write... sounded very inspired by what you felt and those are really the only great poems in my opinion. Keep writing
Des

Re: SILENT RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by sunflower on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 10:00:48 AM AEST
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rain is a natural background for the longing and sadness, liked this, felt this

Re: SILENT RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 09:35:13 PM AEST
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True emotion and feeling put to words. So Tough to do, yet, you did. Great write Thanks.

Re: SILENT RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 09:15:59 AM AEST
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tragically beautiful poem...

Re: SILENT RAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 07:44:34 PM AEST
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The visuals... now I can see why so many people like your work... I'm just sorry it took me so long to find your poem... This is soooo beautiful... I'm going to cry...

YS

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