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Array ( [sid] => 127541 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Insecurity [time] => 2006-10-28 21:47:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Its the middle of the night
All I hear is the clock ticking
Down the street there is a light
Burning so blindingly bright
My breath remains still
My heart has stopped beating
My vains are closly tied
But i continue bleeding

"So tell that you love me
So I will know for sure
Cuz at this moment
I cant be too sure
Or am I just insecure?"

Its beating at my brain
Cutting me at my soul
Ripping me apat
Feeling so numb and cold
Steadly i continue
Walking through this fire
These burning insecuities
To reach my desire

"So tell me that you love me
So I will know for sure
Cuz at this momen
I can't be too sure
Or am I just insecure?"

~Its not that I doubt you love me
It just i'm scared you dont love me the way I think you do~

"So tell me that you love me
So i will know for sure
Cuz at this moment
I cant be too sure
Or am I just insecure?" [comments] => 3 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 34 [informant] => dark_fighter_chick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Insecurity

Contributed by dark_fighter_chick on Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 09:47:59 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Its the middle of the night
All I hear is the clock ticking
Down the street there is a light
Burning so blindingly bright
My breath remains still
My heart has stopped beating
My vains are closly tied
But i continue bleeding

"So tell that you love me
So I will know for sure
Cuz at this moment
I cant be too sure
Or am I just insecure?"

Its beating at my brain
Cutting me at my soul
Ripping me apat
Feeling so numb and cold
Steadly i continue
Walking through this fire
These burning insecuities
To reach my desire

"So tell me that you love me
So I will know for sure
Cuz at this momen
I can't be too sure
Or am I just insecure?"

~Its not that I doubt you love me
It just i'm scared you dont love me the way I think you do~

"So tell me that you love me
So i will know for sure
Cuz at this moment
I cant be too sure
Or am I just insecure?"

Copyright © dark_fighter_chick ... [ 2006-10-28 21:47:59]
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Re: Insecurity (User Rating: 1 )
by sally-heart-jack on Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 11:14:51 PM AEST
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Best lines are:
My breath remains still
My heart has stopped beating
My vains are closly tied
But i continue bleeding

Yep.

You did good!^^

Re: Insecurity (User Rating: 1 )
by TwistedCage on Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 09:47:36 AM AEST
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Awsome lyrics, imo...

The chorus is what really stands out to me.

Re: Insecurity (User Rating: 1 )
by Kourtni on Friday, 19th June 2009 @ 11:22:40 AM AEST
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this is absolutely fantastic.
wonderfully written!
keep up the good work(:

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