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Array ( [sid] => 127399 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lament [time] => 2006-10-25 15:41:42 [hometext] => I am sure my work is a bit trippie and not directly appealing to more common denominators of verse. I hope it strikes a cord enough for comments as I enjoy input. [bodytext] => Data set: creature of loss
at loss for center.
Feed,
Switch,
Replace,
Simulate.

Long, stretch as ground,
lobe to loam,
sadness pains
expressed often in terms of need
taking shape as time.

We polish our loss,
pearl the kernels in the ego bowl.
Awhile begging unexpectedly addicted and
bound by peptide chains
with hidden links to indulgent acts.

By any name
mind
lure,
jig,
reel.

'Yes!' We say to ourselves.

'Thats it?' and 'This is all there is?'

Unless the small choices turn it around!

As 'Savoir Faire is Every Where'
Spin is Every Thing.

AJPIII [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 73 [informant] => yangdantien [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Lament

Contributed by yangdantien on Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 03:41:42 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Data set: creature of loss
at loss for center.
Feed,
Switch,
Replace,
Simulate.

Long, stretch as ground,
lobe to loam,
sadness pains
expressed often in terms of need
taking shape as time.

We polish our loss,
pearl the kernels in the ego bowl.
Awhile begging unexpectedly addicted and
bound by peptide chains
with hidden links to indulgent acts.

By any name
mind
lure,
jig,
reel.

'Yes!' We say to ourselves.

'Thats it?' and 'This is all there is?'

Unless the small choices turn it around!

As 'Savoir Faire is Every Where'
Spin is Every Thing.

AJPIII

Copyright © yangdantien ... [ 2006-10-25 15:41:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lament (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 04:28:51 PM AEST
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its interesting....hard ot understand but i liek it weather its confusing or not...its different!
i think you meant it to be confusing tho b/c its abotu being confused, confused with life confused and askign 'why?' but not getting an answer
i like it
i'm very confused right no w and this makes me feel like i'll figure it all out eventually

Re: Lament (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 05:31:37 PM AEST
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Yeah, a nice trippy write indeed. I really dug this part....

"We polish our loss,
pearl the kernels in the ego bowl.
Awhile begging unexpectedly addicted and
bound by peptide chains
with hidden lengths to indulgent acts"

Peace, Laura
(who read it a couple times) *wink*

Re: Lament (User Rating: 1 )
by Faust on Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 10:35:14 PM AEST
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I really wish I understood this well enough to get the messages.. I hope I will in time though. I'm sure it's a great one.

Eternally Punished,
Faust

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