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Array ( [sid] => 127174 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lady of Death [time] => 2006-10-20 10:27:03 [hometext] => This was written a while back, but I feel one of my best [bodytext] => As the wind howls, the rafters of the old house creak
The lady appears, so desolate she seems
Her soft silent cry makes the whole world bleak
She looks for revenge as she deems.

Caught between life and death
The lady does not know
She has taken her last breathe
She wails and cries so.

If I could help her I would
To realize she belongs in the realm beyond pain
She needs to go, she really should
Into the world which again she would be sane.

The lady silently wanders and walks
This earth in pursuit to rest her soul
When someone sees her they just gawk
They don't realize she's trying to come out of her hole.

The lady belongs in the land of the heavenly realm
She seeks justice for the pain she endured
Of her destiny, she is at the helm
One day I hope she will find the cure.

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Lady of Death

Contributed by abbey74 on Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 10:27:03 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

As the wind howls, the rafters of the old house creak
The lady appears, so desolate she seems
Her soft silent cry makes the whole world bleak
She looks for revenge as she deems.

Caught between life and death
The lady does not know
She has taken her last breathe
She wails and cries so.

If I could help her I would
To realize she belongs in the realm beyond pain
She needs to go, she really should
Into the world which again she would be sane.

The lady silently wanders and walks
This earth in pursuit to rest her soul
When someone sees her they just gawk
They don't realize she's trying to come out of her hole.

The lady belongs in the land of the heavenly realm
She seeks justice for the pain she endured
Of her destiny, she is at the helm
One day I hope she will find the cure.

Copyright © abbey74 ... [ 2006-10-20 10:27:03]
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Re: Lady of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 02:00:27 PM AEST
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Dark and soulful write yet pained with sadness. Dark side fits you well! Nicely done.

~Michelle~

Re: Lady of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 04:31:26 PM AEST
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so pretty and sad.i love it.she lost forever b/w
i love this concept.freaking awsome job

Re: Lady of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 01:02:07 AM AEST
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I really like this poem. so sad and full of pain. great write.

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