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Array ( [sid] => 127117 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fallen [time] => 2006-10-18 20:57:15 [hometext] => This poem is about a person who was just as in love with me as I was with her. Which made it it that much harder to accept that we could never be together. [bodytext] => Huddled in the corner
Escaping from the strife
I knew not what to do
Or why God gave me life

My bills were piling up
My bank account was tapped
My car was in a junk yard
Who imagined that

On my way to jail
You still pushed our love aside
But that's what kept me going
Through the darkest nights

I knew that you were taken
Still the truth I could not hide
So I had to leave you
And let our friendship ride

Though it broke my heart
Not to be in your life
I couldn't go on knowing
You would never be my wife

The pain has disappeared
And so now does the light
I'm sorry for your sadness
As you bury me tonight [comments] => 4 [counter] => 263 [topic] => 22 [informant] => SerenePsycho [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Fallen

Contributed by SerenePsycho on Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 08:57:15 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Huddled in the corner
Escaping from the strife
I knew not what to do
Or why God gave me life

My bills were piling up
My bank account was tapped
My car was in a junk yard
Who imagined that

On my way to jail
You still pushed our love aside
But that's what kept me going
Through the darkest nights

I knew that you were taken
Still the truth I could not hide
So I had to leave you
And let our friendship ride

Though it broke my heart
Not to be in your life
I couldn't go on knowing
You would never be my wife

The pain has disappeared
And so now does the light
I'm sorry for your sadness
As you bury me tonight




Copyright © SerenePsycho ... [ 2006-10-18 20:57:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 01:06:26 AM AEST
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OMG wow that was great... i love every last word great job...
tasha


Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by lipsofanangel on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 07:56:18 AM AEST
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You had me hanging on to every wordd. Its so romantic


Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Craze on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 09:43:27 AM AEST
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great write i have a similar poem but yours is much better mine is called breathless but awsome write i look forward to some more of your work
much love
Craze


Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticHybrid on Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 03:36:17 AM AEST
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Very nice work. Don't go posting many like this one. I told you about this site, don't go making me look bad. Just kidding. Keep up the good work.




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