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Array ( [sid] => 126945 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Down in the end! Manipulate me! [time] => 2006-10-15 09:31:47 [hometext] => This is just emotional poetry. It flows, its upto you to allow it to give meaning to something in your life. This is for everyone about anything. MaJ. Plz Comment [bodytext] => ---------------_____________-----------------

Hey! Lie awake and wait out all those Days!
Till I finally come home
Changed and jaded, everything that I hate
I'll be there...

Trading in my youth, for broken wings
As I slowly watch you
Walk away, so walk away
Will you stay, will you stay, or will you walk away?
Finish me off, follow the plan
Break all the bonds, sever the ties

Failed from the start
Science breeds abuse
State of the art
Logic bending truth

Complicated formula of flesh
Contradicting transparent duress
Crying for the past
Is something we've all, done
Lying to, ourselves is a way For us to run
We must die in Ourselves to pull through

And now your mission is complete, find and destroy me.
Torturing me, with words from your lips
Filleting my skin, pulling my teeth
Please forgive me for not being good enough.
Drown your sorrows in my pain
And it's something you can't explain.
When I'm choking on words you'll never say
And you'll never feel the same

Im counting down to hear the sound
Binded by fates darkside stopping me in stride
Pretend its not forver ill pull myself together
Ill say I was not hurt Ill say its only dust and dirt
That washes my skin away washes my stained pain

Its only reality is it really?
Bend a circle into a bent square
Manipulate words into sounds of silence
Maniuplate me heart into beating once again!

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Down in the end! Manipulate me!

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 09:31:47 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



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Hey! Lie awake and wait out all those Days!
Till I finally come home
Changed and jaded, everything that I hate
I'll be there...

Trading in my youth, for broken wings
As I slowly watch you
Walk away, so walk away
Will you stay, will you stay, or will you walk away?
Finish me off, follow the plan
Break all the bonds, sever the ties

Failed from the start
Science breeds abuse
State of the art
Logic bending truth

Complicated formula of flesh
Contradicting transparent duress
Crying for the past
Is something we've all, done
Lying to, ourselves is a way For us to run
We must die in Ourselves to pull through

And now your mission is complete, find and destroy me.
Torturing me, with words from your lips
Filleting my skin, pulling my teeth
Please forgive me for not being good enough.
Drown your sorrows in my pain
And it's something you can't explain.
When I'm choking on words you'll never say
And you'll never feel the same

Im counting down to hear the sound
Binded by fates darkside stopping me in stride
Pretend its not forver ill pull myself together
Ill say I was not hurt Ill say its only dust and dirt
That washes my skin away washes my stained pain

Its only reality is it really?
Bend a circle into a bent square
Manipulate words into sounds of silence
Maniuplate me heart into beating once again!





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Re: Down in the end! Manipulate me! (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 09:53:09 AM AEST
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Know what you mean. Bend me shape me into what you want. Thats a true and thought provoking write.You have certainly hit a raw nerve with me, it could be me. I enjoyed the read very much, but it sure does make you think. Sue x


Re: Down in the end! Manipulate me! (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 03:38:36 PM AEST
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lots to think about in this write..manipulate the sound of silence..very profound..


Re: Down in the end! Manipulate me! (User Rating: 1 )
by sally-heart-jack on Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 09:35:43 PM AEST
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I like this first line of this stanza, the first thing that comes to my mind is DNA? haha but that's just me:

Complicated formula of flesh
Contradicting transparent duress

And this is true, everyone's regret something:

Crying for the past
Is something we've all, done
Lying to, ourselves is a way For us to run
We must die in Ourselves to pull through

"Die in ourselves" just sounds really cool to me! ^^
And this reminds me of the poem I wrote "TITLE GOES HERE"

When I'm choking on words you'll never say
And you'll never feel the same

Bluntly sad.

Good job!!




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