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they take what others can not perceive
What lies on the outside, Blinds some
Why does it do that to many?
Why can't people truly see...
Its like taking an old book, and saying
Out, and throw it away
It shouldnt happen
What matters is what is felt through and through
Gasp
Will it ever change?
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Outside cover which Blinds

Contributed by brew on Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 07:53:12 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Images that are seen
they take what others can not perceive
What lies on the outside, Blinds some
Why does it do that to many?
Why can't people truly see...
Its like taking an old book, and saying
Out, and throw it away
It shouldnt happen
What matters is what is felt through and through
Gasp
Will it ever change?

Copyright © brew ... [ 2006-10-09 19:53:12]
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Re: Outside cover which Blinds (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 08:05:02 PM AEST
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Beautiful sentiments Dayna .. and so very heartfelt.

I feel ya here, hun. I truly do. It's sad, the reality of
today's society that so much pressure is put on the
presentation, instead of what lies within.
For there, THERE, is where the true treasures are
to be found.

Excellent post, hun. I've missed you!

*hugs*

~Breezy

Re: Outside cover which Blinds (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 08:10:40 PM AEST
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Miss ya too and everyone else. Just been busy.......lil out there.! THANKS for the lovely comment. ! Love ya Roxy and everyone else who has ever cared.

Brew~

Re: Outside cover which Blinds (User Rating: 1 )
by SmileSkinDeep on Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 10:37:02 PM AEST
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what if the inside is ugly...what the hell do we do then? mostly the only time the inside is ugly is when the outiside is so pretty.

Re: Outside cover which Blinds (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 10:43:20 PM AEST
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wow i really liked this poem very deep
great job
keep on writing i will be reading

Re: Outside cover which Blinds (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 11:18:08 PM AEST
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My dearest Dayna~
Sadly that's what society has put forward to us. We are merely judged by our appearance. Beauty is beyond the layers.It comes from within ones heart and you Miss are a beautiful and special young lady with a big heart of gold~ don't ever let anybody tell you any different.
A very heartfelt post~ Thanks for sharing it with us my dear friend.
much love, hugs n prayers,
Sue M
who has missed you heaps too!

Re: Outside cover which Blinds (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 11:22:13 AM AEST
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well done

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