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Array ( [sid] => 126679 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Icey Walls [time] => 2006-10-08 02:28:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I can feel the anger
poor into my every beat
when did you all become
such a big part of my life?
all your lies
designed to bring me down
wrong again
don't depend
on any reaction again

I remember when
these icey walls
first shot up
you all bleed me dry
and I don't know why

I pretend
you don't have anything
better to do
every time I walk on by
I'm lost behind your pittys

wait again
not done with the screaming
I pretend
you guys have nothing
better to do

I wait for that door
to swing again
to walk on through
never to meet your eyes again

silently alone
I remember those icy walls
shooting up
like you never cared before
maybe I'll stop to watch your act
then I'll be on my way

if I play my life
for the rest of the game
will you repay me
with your shame?

I'm lost behind your pittys
wait again
not through with the screaming
I'd trade my life
for a barrel of gold

I'm ashamed
of every moment that I remember
of every time
of every day
somehow I always
remember the words
that used to be [comments] => 2 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 6 [informant] => The_Unknown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Icey Walls

Contributed by The_Unknown on Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 02:28:12 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I can feel the anger
poor into my every beat
when did you all become
such a big part of my life?
all your lies
designed to bring me down
wrong again
don't depend
on any reaction again

I remember when
these icey walls
first shot up
you all bleed me dry
and I don't know why

I pretend
you don't have anything
better to do
every time I walk on by
I'm lost behind your pittys

wait again
not done with the screaming
I pretend
you guys have nothing
better to do

I wait for that door
to swing again
to walk on through
never to meet your eyes again

silently alone
I remember those icy walls
shooting up
like you never cared before
maybe I'll stop to watch your act
then I'll be on my way

if I play my life
for the rest of the game
will you repay me
with your shame?

I'm lost behind your pittys
wait again
not through with the screaming
I'd trade my life
for a barrel of gold

I'm ashamed
of every moment that I remember
of every time
of every day
somehow I always
remember the words
that used to be

Copyright © The_Unknown ... [ 2006-10-08 02:28:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Icey Walls (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 02:37:42 AM AEST
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Very deep, strong write.
Hope all is well.
luvs ya,
emy

Re: Icey Walls (User Rating: 1 )
by JoeyTrib1550 on Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 03:48:14 AM AEST
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You're shooting out poems like a mashine gun aren't you?
Totaly glad to see that the quality of them don't suffer the tyniest bit!
Great work

with much love and regret, for they can't be seperated,
Marc

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