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Array ( [sid] => 126429 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Take Me Away [time] => 2006-10-01 21:48:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It feels like every time I turn around

there you are

and even though it's getting close to closing time

let's forget

our regrets

don't think about, don't worry

because our time is now

I remeber back in the day

we'd play cards

our own way

we'd run around

all over school

and watch our life slip away

becuse even though

we may not belong

we stood up

against what is wrong

these words they faid away

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Take Me Away

Contributed by punkhead13 on Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 09:48:22 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

It feels like every time I turn around

there you are

and even though it's getting close to closing time

let's forget

our regrets

don't think about, don't worry

because our time is now

I remeber back in the day

we'd play cards

our own way

we'd run around

all over school

and watch our life slip away

becuse even though

we may not belong

we stood up

against what is wrong

these words they faid away

Copyright © punkhead13 ... [ 2006-10-01 21:48:22]
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Re: Take Me Away (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 10:02:43 PM AEST
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A couple spelling errors, but the write had great meaning. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura

Re: Take Me Away (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 10:15:58 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
huggs,
emy

Re: Take Me Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 11:15:03 PM AEST
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good poem I liked reading it
i took my time to read it
and enjoyed
but you need to take a little time to go over it and check for mispellings its to good to have simple mistakes
please dont take offence just a little friendly advice
you keep writing and i will read

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