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Array ( [sid] => 126389 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Little White Pills [time] => 2006-09-30 18:35:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Little white pills in my hand
I count them to 30
I count them to 40
I count them again and again
Little white pills in my hand
I shake them and hold them
I swallow them down
No little white pills in my hand
Down my throat into my stomach
The darkness is coming fast
These little white pills
I think they will save me
But I vomit them up in a flash
Little white pills on the ground
You betrayed me and left me
The pain overwhelms me
I guess I’ll have to find another savior [comments] => 2 [counter] => 295 [topic] => 36 [informant] => DannyGirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Little White Pills

Contributed by DannyGirl on Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 06:35:47 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Little white pills in my hand
I count them to 30
I count them to 40
I count them again and again
Little white pills in my hand
I shake them and hold them
I swallow them down
No little white pills in my hand
Down my throat into my stomach
The darkness is coming fast
These little white pills
I think they will save me
But I vomit them up in a flash
Little white pills on the ground
You betrayed me and left me
The pain overwhelms me
I guess I’ll have to find another savior




Copyright © DannyGirl ... [ 2006-09-30 18:35:47]
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Re: Little White Pills (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 09:43:38 PM AEST
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dont know if this is true or not
but pills are bad lol
I had a problem with them
the poem is very deep and thought provoking
just stay strong and if you need to talk or anything hit me up i have good ears and maybe good advice too


Re: Little White Pills (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 05:43:48 PM AEST
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pills never work..there is a med you can take to keep you from vomiting..but then you're just brain dead and still alive. what good is that...just use your pen and write out the depression.. good job on the poem.
mary




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