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[title] => Keep on Going ( The key to survival)
[time] => 2006-09-26 02:35:49
[hometext] => Thinking out loud Sue x
[bodytext] => Restless night in my sight,
Hours until the dawn,
Sleepless times ,restless mind,
Makes my life so full of scorn,
Long hard days, with little pay,
Make me feel like giving up,
Bills are high, although I try,
I drink from a bottomless cup,
Life is grim , here within,
The road goes on for miles,
No respite, I don't see light,
But still my mouth it smiles,
Future blooms, prospects loom,
Optimism is the way,
Things may change, or rearrange,
Tomorrow is a brand new day
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[topicname] => InspirationalPoems
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Keep on Going ( The key to survival)
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 02:35:49 AM in AEST
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Restless night in my sight,
Hours until the dawn,
Sleepless times ,restless mind,
Makes my life so full of scorn,
Long hard days, with little pay,
Make me feel like giving up,
Bills are high, although I try,
I drink from a bottomless cup,
Life is grim , here within,
The road goes on for miles,
No respite, I don't see light,
But still my mouth it smiles,
Future blooms, prospects loom,
Optimism is the way,
Things may change, or rearrange,
Tomorrow is a brand new day
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Re: Keep on Going ( The key to survival)
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 02:50:03 AM AEST
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I hear ya friend,
I think all can relate to this one many times over.
Hang tuff, friend. Joy cometh in the morning.
luv, huggs, understanding.
emy |
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Re: Keep on Going ( The key to survival)
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 03:16:10 AM AEST
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I hear you loud and clear. I can’t agree with you more. We can only take one day at a time. May peace and joy continue to be in your heart. “Smile”
sadaddy |
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Re: Keep on Going ( The key to survival)
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by AnastasiaN on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:00:20 AM AEST
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| That's what I keep saying...to everyone else anyhow. when it comes to myself I seem to forget that simple piece of advice. Why do you think that is? I keep trying to tell myself...other ppl have worse problems than i do...why should i even cry? but that just ain't working right now...pity. |
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Re: Keep on Going ( The key to survival)
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by Oneir8dude on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 07:03:21 AM AEST
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"Things may change, or rearrange,
Tomorrow is a brand new day"
Yes it is my friend.... sweet heart felt feeling here...
You make me sad..... :'( Beautiful....
Thank You
Bill
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Re: Keep on Going ( The key to survival)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 11:04:44 AM AEST
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Awesome and sage thinking out loud, Sue. Keep smiling, you've got a beautiful one!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Keep on Going ( The key to survival)
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 01:50:05 PM AEST
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This started out kinda sad and picked up speed to happy in the end. I liked it. Nice flow. TY for an upbeat way of looking at things. :o) Peace to you.
Thumper ;o) |
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Re: Keep on Going ( The key to survival)
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 05:30:26 PM AEST
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My dear friend Sue, it has been far too long since I last stopped to visit your pages. As always the contents are never disappointing. I have missed reading your work. You have the amazing ability to turn a sad poem into a happy one. You have a beautiful heart of gold my dear friend.
I have come to learn that it's no use dwelling on the downs in my life for there is always someone else out there worse off than me.
Life might be grim, but deep within
Your beautiful radiant heart glows
No time to despair, you know we care
For happiness in your heart grows~
Taking each day as it comes my dear friend. May your smile never fade from your beautiful face. Take care dearest Sue~
love, hugs n prayers,
Sue M |
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Re: Keep on Going ( The key to survival)
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:41:32 PM AEST
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I hear this and feel it and forsure understand it indeed! Your ending to this thought filled write seals it, your so right, tomorrow is a new day and something brighter has got to be around one of those new sun rises.
Bless you and lots of hugs
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Keep on Going ( The key to survival)
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 10:50:05 PM AEST
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I feel you on this flow
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