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Array ( [sid] => 126174 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This feeling of nature [time] => 2006-09-25 06:27:11 [hometext] => Nature is there to be explored by people... [bodytext] => The stars are twinkling in the sky
The rivers are far from being dry.
The beautiful valleys, we must explore,
And the lands where flowers grow ashore.
Let's sail in a boat past the seas
And feel the pleasure of the cool breeze.
Let's walk beside the wonderful lake
Where the roses are always awake.
Let's watch the birds moving their wings,
Let's hear them as they sweetly sing,
Let's see the true colours of spring,
Let's wait together and see what it brings. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 27 [informant] => ammar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

This feeling of nature

Contributed by ammar on Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 06:27:11 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

The stars are twinkling in the sky
The rivers are far from being dry.
The beautiful valleys, we must explore,
And the lands where flowers grow ashore.
Let's sail in a boat past the seas
And feel the pleasure of the cool breeze.
Let's walk beside the wonderful lake
Where the roses are always awake.
Let's watch the birds moving their wings,
Let's hear them as they sweetly sing,
Let's see the true colours of spring,
Let's wait together and see what it brings.

Copyright © ammar ... [ 2006-09-25 06:27:11]
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Re: This feeling of nature (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 09:34:41 AM AEST
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What a beautiful journey! Your poem makes me want to take a walk, and really do all the things you've mentioned. Such a soothing write!

Re: This feeling of nature (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 08:10:17 PM AEST
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A most beautiful and enjoyable write you have penned for us dear Ammar. The imagery you cast into your readers head takes them on an uplifting journey into the colourful season of spring.
You have done a fine job with this. Well done and keep up the awesome work~
hugs n prayers,
Sue M

Re: This feeling of nature (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 12:15:20 AM AEST
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This was an enjoyable way to express the beauty of nature. I try everyday to take in something of nature, even if it's a bird outside my window. Very nice to read. Good Job! Peace to you.
Thumper ;o)

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