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'til words form on my arms
Desperate cries of solitude
unworthy of their charms
Forget-me-nots have their own mask
Disguise themselves as scars
Those brutal tears aren't worthy
of the pain they say is ours

Distorted lines on hostile skin
place shadows in my eyes
The colour's won't come back again
until the darkness cries
Don't think you know
Don't try to see
My world cannot be found
It's only there for those like me
where blood falls to the ground [comments] => 4 [counter] => 444 [topic] => 13 [informant] => deadclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

KISSING THE DARKNESS GOODNIGHT

Contributed by deadclown on Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 05:42:32 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Razors plunging violently
'til words form on my arms
Desperate cries of solitude
unworthy of their charms
Forget-me-nots have their own mask
Disguise themselves as scars
Those brutal tears aren't worthy
of the pain they say is ours

Distorted lines on hostile skin
place shadows in my eyes
The colour's won't come back again
until the darkness cries
Don't think you know
Don't try to see
My world cannot be found
It's only there for those like me
where blood falls to the ground

Copyright © deadclown ... [ 2006-09-21 17:42:32]
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Re: KISSING THE DARKNESS GOODNIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by LonelyPoet on Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 05:45:57 PM AEST
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This is one of the saddest poems ive ever read..and so well written..I hope things are ok with you.

Re: KISSING THE DARKNESS GOODNIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 05:58:59 PM AEST
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fantastic write....very painful. i hope it gets better for you.

--talli

Re: KISSING THE DARKNESS GOODNIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 07:37:23 AM AEST
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coming from an ex-cutter i understand what you are saying and i know how you feel .everyday i fight the urge to cut and it is so had to do.
i love your line till darkness crys
wow its so deep and true.
great write

Re: KISSING THE DARKNESS GOODNIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by StormyNites on Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 01:21:24 PM AEST
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such vividness, so emotional..its a very good poem..i hope for better times for you.

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