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Array ( [sid] => 125992 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => rain drops [time] => 2006-09-20 12:07:20 [hometext] => read. If you love the art that is poetry, you'll understand. [bodytext] => The rain falls.
And every drop that hit the surface I am reminded of you.
I am reminded of the tears you cried, and they make me shiver.
To know that I have wronged you, I deserve not to exist.
I wish you were still here, but alas I am yet to be answer for the prayer and favor I ask of "God" everyday.
I wish I could see you one last time, though I don't know what I would say, would I waste time with such words?
I don't think so...............
The rain falls.
And finally you understand. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 354 [topic] => 48 [informant] => skitzo-da-clown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

rain drops

Contributed by skitzo-da-clown on Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 12:07:20 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The rain falls.
And every drop that hit the surface I am reminded of you.
I am reminded of the tears you cried, and they make me shiver.
To know that I have wronged you, I deserve not to exist.
I wish you were still here, but alas I am yet to be answer for the prayer and favor I ask of "God" everyday.
I wish I could see you one last time, though I don't know what I would say, would I waste time with such words?
I don't think so...............
The rain falls.
And finally you understand.

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Re: rain drops (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 12:38:52 PM AEST
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This was a good poem.. I liked it alot... It made me think about a time maybe a year ago and what had happened to me with someone... This was a good poem..

Take care
christina

Re: rain drops (User Rating: 1 )
by StormyNites on Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 12:44:07 PM AEST
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A great poem Skitzo..i think there are lot of us out there that can relate.

Re: rain drops (User Rating: 1 )
by evolon on Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 12:49:16 PM AEST
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great poem, made me reflect on a time the recently passed but viewing it in your words made me realize my wrong played a small part.

Re: rain drops (User Rating: 1 )
by BobbyZimmerman on Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 09:14:38 PM AEST
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Great write man, I'm reminded of "Kathy's Song" by Simon and Garfunkel, not a bad thing at all....good job.

Re: rain drops (User Rating: 1 )
by kittie30 on Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 09:49:43 PM AEST
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very good write...i had gone through the same thing and came up with sumthing similar, keep it up i think u may find comfort in your own words if u look deep enough into them

---Zane

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