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Array ( [sid] => 125968 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Upside Down World [time] => 2006-09-19 20:50:02 [hometext] => A little while ago, with the death of a relationship on my doorstep, I was feeling that love was hopeless. Someone walked into my life and, I suppose, I can call it love at first sight. This is what I wrote. [bodytext] => A small thing
sweet and innocent
- when compared with humanity
an action; subtle
an unmanly reaction
logic, what logic
- but for the moment
when the heart takes control
and the world turns upside down
and normality becomes impossible
and the impossible becomes conquerable
- for that feeling
- for the awaken heart
leaving the cold darkness
and the endless hope of dawn;
a small thing
sweet and innocent
- when compared with humanity
an action; so subtle…

5/4/06
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The Upside Down World

Contributed by one-curly-fry on Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 08:50:02 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

A small thing
sweet and innocent
- when compared with humanity
an action; subtle
an unmanly reaction
logic, what logic
- but for the moment
when the heart takes control
and the world turns upside down
and normality becomes impossible
and the impossible becomes conquerable
- for that feeling
- for the awaken heart
leaving the cold darkness
and the endless hope of dawn;
a small thing
sweet and innocent
- when compared with humanity
an action; so subtle…

5/4/06

Copyright Â© one-curly-fry ... [ 2006-09-19 20:50:02]
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Re: The Upside Down World (User Rating: 1 )
by one-curly-fry on Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 09:03:44 PM AEST
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The problem with love at first sight is that it's very shallow. Our first talk was what did it, but since getting to know her... well...

Re: The Upside Down World (User Rating: 1 )
by InfamousKilljoy on Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 11:05:25 PM AEST
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Your writing is very deep and emotional, I also love the format of the poem.

Re: The Upside Down World (User Rating: 1 )
by InfamousKilljoy on Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 11:05:27 PM AEST
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Your writing is very deep and emotional, I also love the format of the poem.

Re: The Upside Down World (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 02:42:07 AM AEST
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I think this write is simply beautiful. I really like the flow of it, and I think you did a wonderful job in capturing your feelings then. Awesome write!!

Re: The Upside Down World (User Rating: 1 )
by whiteleo1984 on Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 03:44:44 AM AEST
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wondeful format, beautiful writing... love it... great job!

Re: The Upside Down World (User Rating: 1 )
by LonelyPoet on Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 07:09:22 PM AEST
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You have such a great gift in your writings..i truly love them.

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