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Array ( [sid] => 125908 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => we cant [time] => 2006-09-18 14:49:12 [hometext] => my friend and i were in a fight. we are not freinds anymore. [bodytext] => i know you can hurt me
i know you can
your words can break me
into two halfs
you can make me cry
diamonds tears
that why they shatter
all of our years
they shatter into peices
that tear my soul
they shatter into peices
that that dig a hole
dig a hole
way deep down inside me
to bury our memoroies
and the times when you
would be right beside me
but i know
i know that it could no longer be
i hope you will see
that this freindship has gone on far too long
far to long for me to suffer this pain
this pain in wich
has hurt me so
i dont want to cry anymore
i dont want to suffer
because this freindship has become
tougher and tougher
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 52 [informant] => rubi123 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

we cant

Contributed by rubi123 on Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 02:49:12 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

i know you can hurt me
i know you can
your words can break me
into two halfs
you can make me cry
diamonds tears
that why they shatter
all of our years
they shatter into peices
that tear my soul
they shatter into peices
that that dig a hole
dig a hole
way deep down inside me
to bury our memoroies
and the times when you
would be right beside me
but i know
i know that it could no longer be
i hope you will see
that this freindship has gone on far too long
far to long for me to suffer this pain
this pain in wich
has hurt me so
i dont want to cry anymore
i dont want to suffer
because this freindship has become
tougher and tougher

Copyright © rubi123 ... [ 2006-09-18 14:49:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: we cant (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 05:06:42 PM AEST
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Heartbreaking write. I feel your hurt and pain.
Your right this isnt a nurting relationship, if it only brings hurt and suffering your better off without it. Life is meant for better things.

hugssss
~Michelle~

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