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And I know I was every cliché
Of a guy who mistreated a girl with too much to lose
But with every bruise, I promise you that it hurt me too

Your perfection changed me
And I know sometimes I acted a little crazy
But, Lauryn, you know I was in love with you
And I agree, this apology is long overdue

I cannot express in writing how much I regret this
To you, the girl who could make me melt with one kiss
If I could go back I’d make sure you were treated right
I’d make sure I could give you one last kiss tonight

And I’ll always remember that night at Howard’s
Where I held you in my arms for nearly an hour
You looked so beautiful, as you always do
And I felt so lucky to finally be next to you [comments] => 3 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 24 [informant] => JoeDuvivier [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

I'm Sorry, Lauryn

Contributed by JoeDuvivier on Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 11:24:55 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Your eyes took my breath away
And I know I was every cliché
Of a guy who mistreated a girl with too much to lose
But with every bruise, I promise you that it hurt me too

Your perfection changed me
And I know sometimes I acted a little crazy
But, Lauryn, you know I was in love with you
And I agree, this apology is long overdue

I cannot express in writing how much I regret this
To you, the girl who could make me melt with one kiss
If I could go back I’d make sure you were treated right
I’d make sure I could give you one last kiss tonight

And I’ll always remember that night at Howard’s
Where I held you in my arms for nearly an hour
You looked so beautiful, as you always do
And I felt so lucky to finally be next to you

Copyright Â© JoeDuvivier ... [ 2006-09-16 11:24:55]
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Re: I'm Sorry, Lauryn (User Rating: 1 )
by Light_to_your_Darkness on Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 02:17:58 PM AEST
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This was so sad, she obviously meant alot to you. It was a very good write though.

Re: I'm Sorry, Lauryn (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 03:17:03 PM AEST
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Maybe you should show this to her. A sincere apology is a rare gem these days.
Nicely written.

~ Michelle~

Re: I'm Sorry, Lauryn (User Rating: 1 )
by Hakiokusaken on Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 03:43:00 PM AEST
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Excellent Write! I really felt the emotions in this poem. I hope everything works out between you two. Good Poem, Keep up the good work.
*Hakiokusaken*

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