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Array ( [sid] => 125754 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Twisted Fairy Tale [time] => 2006-09-14 19:08:49 [hometext] => Everything in this twisted tale just makes her feel even more at home... [bodytext] => TWISTED FAIRY TALE

The fear abates for the very first time
She's finally able to take a breath
And take a good look around
Who would have ever thought?

She walks through forests of darkest hate
And wades through rivers of painful tears
And still the fear doesn't return
This is where she was meant to be

Lost in the fear of spoken tales
Others would have cried out
But the tales don't scare her now
She knows they were all true

This fairy tale weaves the tears
And boasts the pain of victims fears
She'll grasp the hand that's offered her
And follow the bloodstained paths right home

A shattered mirror graces the wall
Seven years good luck she hopes
Everything in this twisted tale
Just makes her feel even more at home

The red stained moon provide the light
And bathes the world in cold delight
She's not scared to touch the thorn
This isn't where the story ends

She laughs a bitter flavored laugh
And shakes out her mane of wild hair
Just what would they think now
If they could see the girl she's become?

A walk across the broken glass
Her blood now stains the floor
She smiles as she opens the door
And steps out of the world of the already known

The blackness swallows her whole
Just like she'd always dreamt it would
Lost in it's comforting embrace
She could easily lose track of the days

She always loathes to awake
From the life beyond the known
This is everything she's ever dreamed
And everything she'll ever need

This twisted fairy tale belongs to her
Locked safely in her twisted mind
And nobody will ever know
The world she uses to escape her own

~ Cassandra Sayen Teague ~ [comments] => 4 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 31 [informant] => NothingMoreNothingLess [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
Twisted Fairy Tale

Contributed by NothingMoreNothingLess on Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 07:08:49 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



TWISTED FAIRY TALE

The fear abates for the very first time
She's finally able to take a breath
And take a good look around
Who would have ever thought?

She walks through forests of darkest hate
And wades through rivers of painful tears
And still the fear doesn't return
This is where she was meant to be

Lost in the fear of spoken tales
Others would have cried out
But the tales don't scare her now
She knows they were all true

This fairy tale weaves the tears
And boasts the pain of victims fears
She'll grasp the hand that's offered her
And follow the bloodstained paths right home

A shattered mirror graces the wall
Seven years good luck she hopes
Everything in this twisted tale
Just makes her feel even more at home

The red stained moon provide the light
And bathes the world in cold delight
She's not scared to touch the thorn
This isn't where the story ends

She laughs a bitter flavored laugh
And shakes out her mane of wild hair
Just what would they think now
If they could see the girl she's become?

A walk across the broken glass
Her blood now stains the floor
She smiles as she opens the door
And steps out of the world of the already known

The blackness swallows her whole
Just like she'd always dreamt it would
Lost in it's comforting embrace
She could easily lose track of the days

She always loathes to awake
From the life beyond the known
This is everything she's ever dreamed
And everything she'll ever need

This twisted fairy tale belongs to her
Locked safely in her twisted mind
And nobody will ever know
The world she uses to escape her own

~ Cassandra Sayen Teague ~




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Re: Twisted Fairy Tale (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 07:48:20 PM AEST
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good write
vivid imagery

catz


Re: Twisted Fairy Tale (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 09:29:01 PM AEST
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wow, i like that. a twisted fairy tale...thats brilliant. loved it.

lex


Re: Twisted Fairy Tale (User Rating: 1 )
by twbanter on Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 09:43:25 PM AEST
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Wow. Clever, and well written. I liked it a lot.
Thanks for the great read, and keep them coming... You are good at this.
That was a thoughtfull wonderfull world to live in... Problem is.. I've been there....

Tom W


Re: Twisted Fairy Tale (User Rating: 1 )
by Grae on Tuesday, 3rd March 2009 @ 09:22:47 PM AEST
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THAT WAS VERY INTRIGUING I TOTALLY GOT IT




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