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Array ( [sid] => 125673 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Just A Dreamer [time] => 2006-09-12 23:08:28 [hometext] => If loving someone without being loved in return meant that you have to keep on dreaming, wouldn't you wish for your dreams to come true... even just for a single day in your life? I know I would... Comments appreciated. [bodytext] => I lie awake on a sleepless night,
Falling in slumber fills me with fright.
For when I step inside my dream’s door,
I’ll be wishing to wake up no more.

Call me a dreamer, hopelessly in love.
Wishing for a miracle from above,
Praying that someday, you’ll love me too,
Believing that some dreams can come true.

My will gives up as I close my eyes,
And I stroll inside the world of lies,
I see you smiling, holding my hand,
Walking with me in a bliss-filled land.

Flowers bloom with every step you take,
Birds sing along every breath you make.
A rainbow forms from where you stand,
And clouds shift with a wave of your hand.

A gentle wind draws me close to you,
In an embrace that I never knew,
And you enfold your arms around me,
I never knew such tranquility.

Everything is perfect as it seems,
But time passes swiftly inside these dreams,
And I wake up, seeing my empty bed,
With your face lingering in my head.

Even if I want to go back to sleep,
I can do nothing more but weep.
Call me a dreamer, dreaming of you,
Hoping someday, my dreams will come true.



~ Butch Corpuz ~
~ Betrayer Of Hope ~
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I'm Just A Dreamer

Contributed by ButchCorpuz on Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 11:08:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I lie awake on a sleepless night,
Falling in slumber fills me with fright.
For when I step inside my dream’s door,
I’ll be wishing to wake up no more.

Call me a dreamer, hopelessly in love.
Wishing for a miracle from above,
Praying that someday, you’ll love me too,
Believing that some dreams can come true.

My will gives up as I close my eyes,
And I stroll inside the world of lies,
I see you smiling, holding my hand,
Walking with me in a bliss-filled land.

Flowers bloom with every step you take,
Birds sing along every breath you make.
A rainbow forms from where you stand,
And clouds shift with a wave of your hand.

A gentle wind draws me close to you,
In an embrace that I never knew,
And you enfold your arms around me,
I never knew such tranquility.

Everything is perfect as it seems,
But time passes swiftly inside these dreams,
And I wake up, seeing my empty bed,
With your face lingering in my head.

Even if I want to go back to sleep,
I can do nothing more but weep.
Call me a dreamer, dreaming of you,
Hoping someday, my dreams will come true.



~ Butch Corpuz ~
~ Betrayer Of Hope ~




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Re: I'm Just A Dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by richcol7522 on Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 11:14:34 PM AEST
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Very very very good. I know exactly what you mean... I have been married for 5 years and more often than not I feel the way that you have portrayed in what you have written here. I dont think that there is anything here that I can speak negatively about. GREAT write. Thank You.

take care,
Rich


Re: I'm Just A Dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 11:15:00 PM AEST
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OMG Butch this is so beautiful it made me cry. Simply breath taking my friend.

Michelle


Re: I'm Just A Dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 04:10:44 PM AEST
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Wow, that was beautiful!
I completely know what you mean, as I'm sure many do. Sometimes all you want to do is sleep because you know that's the closest you'll ever get... It's such a bad, but at the same time good, feeling...
Great write!




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